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1、4CompositionsI【涉及某一事物的正反两方面的命题】Sample1:Writeanessayin150wordsonShoppingontheInternetbasedontheoutlinegivenbelow.Outline:(1)ShoppingontheInternetisverypopular;(2)theadvantageofshoppingontheInternet;(3)thedisadvantageofshoppingontheInternet.ShoppingontheIntern
2、etIntoday’sinformationage,shoppingontheInternethasbecomemoreandmorepopularinourlives.Consumerscanbuyalmosteverythingtheyneedonline.ShoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages,ofwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.Peoplecansavealotoftimeaswellasenergyby
3、shoppingwithoutsteppingoutofhome.Thisisespeciallydesirabletotheold,thesickandthebusypeoplewhocannotgototheshopsinperson.Alltheyneedtodoistositinfrontoftheircomputersandclickonthemouse.Thegoodstheyorderwillbedeliveredtothempromptly.However,shoppingontheIntern
4、etalsohasitsdisadvantages.Firstly,consumerscan’tseethegoodsortrythemonpersonally.Sometimes,therealgoodsmaynotbethesameasthoseonthecomputer.Secondly,someshopsontheInternetarenotregistered.Theywillneverdeliveranythingtoyouaftertheygetthemoneyfromyou.Oncecheate
5、d,youwillfindthatyouhavenowheretogotocomplain.简评：本题旨在训练比较型论说文的写作能力，即论证分析一食物的正反两面，并作出结论。因文章框架已通过各段落主题句给出，只需根据各段主题句展开论述即可。第一段开门见山直接点题，即信息时代网上购物日渐普遍；第二段和第三段分别阐述网上购物的优缺点。内容上，作者给出了一些具体的例子，如“theold,thesickandthebusypeople”；每一个小点（firstly,secondly）也有两句话展开，并没有点到即止。结构
6、上，however一词在二、三段间起了承上启下的连接作用，而firstly,secondly的使用使得论述的逻辑和层次感加强。语言表达上，简单句与复杂句混合使用，语言富于变化，如“…ofwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience”,“Thisisespeciallydesirabletotheold,thesickandthebusypeoplewhocannotgototheshopsinperson.Alltheyneedtodoistositinfrontof
7、theircomputersandclickonthemouse”,“Oncecheated,youwillfindthatyouhavenowheretogotocomplain.”4Sample2AdvantagesandDisadvantagesofHavingaPart-timeJobAtpresent,moreandmoreuniversitystudentsaredoingpart-timejobs.Theyworkasshopassistants,salespersons,waitersandso
8、on.Likeeverythingelse,havingapart-timejobhasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.引入主题：part-timejobs存在着优缺点Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.First,studentscanhavethechanceofearningpocketmo
