2015年雾霾作文点评.ppt

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1、Welcometoourclass课堂目标1.语法填空点评2.复习现象类说明文的概括方法3.复习三种主题句的写法4.如何写拓展句5.“知己知彼”It’ssaidthatagiantrockwaslocatedintheNorthSeabutoncemanyboatsandships16(strike)itandsank．Aboutacenturyyearsago，akindandimaginativeministercameupwithanideatohaveabuoy(浮标)17(fasten)totherock．Onthetopofthebuoy18

2、(place)abell，19wouldringwheneveranyshipsgotcloser．Whenhearingthebellringing，sailorsknewwheretherockwasandstayedsafe．Oneday,asearobberRoverhappenedtosailnotfarawayfromtherock．Seeing20buoyfloatinginthewater，hedecidedtoplayatrick．Soonhiscrewbrokethechainthatheldthebuoy,letthebellgoi

3、ntothewaterandthensailedaway．Inthefollowingweeks，theyrobbedmany21shipsaroundtheseasandfilledtheshipwithagreat22（vary)oftreasures．Unfortunately,whenreturning，theythemselveshadnoideahowtogetawayfromtheterriblerock23thering．Theshipwasmovingswiftlyinthedark24therewasagreatcrash．25was

4、theveryrockandtheshipbegantosink．AseniorlawmakeronThursdaywarnedofincreasingmortalityoflungcancercausedbyairpollution.Ofallcancers,lungcancermortalityratehasincreasedthefastestinrecentyears,saidlawmakerYangWei,directoroftheNationalNaturalScienceFoundationofChinaandmemberoftheNati

5、onalPeople'sCongress(NPC)StandingCommittee.Yangtoldagroupdiscussionthatrecentstudiesshowlungcanceristhetopkillerformalesandthesecondlargestkillerforfemales,partiallycausedbyaccumulationofairpollutants."Wealwaystalkedaboutsmokinglesstokeephealthy,butoneoftheprimaryreasonisthepollu

6、tedair,"hetoldlawmakersdiscussingareportontheenforcement（实施）oftheLawonthePreventionandControlofAtmosphericPollution.Chinahasvowedtostrengthenairpollutioncontrol.BeijingwilladoptaspecialairpollutioncontrolplanfortheupcomingAPECmeetings,featuringtemporaryclosureoffactoriesintheeven

7、tofapollutionwarning.Readthepassageagain,andfindsomebasicelementsofthearticle:Phenomenon:Reasons:Positiveideas:Negativeideas:Solution:Future/development:--------increasingmortalityoflungcancerthepollutedair----------------Chinahasvowedtostrengthenairpollutioncontrol.Aseniorlawmak

8、eronThursdaywarnedofincreasingmortalityo