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1、CommentsContent:Thisessayisrichinideas.Thewriteropenstheessaywithaninterestingdescriptionofthemysteryoflanguage,andleadsreadersnaturallytothethesisoftheessay“languageplaysmanyroles.”Thewriterthenexplainsthreerolesoflanguage,eachbeingwellexplainedandadequatelysupported.Moreover,thewriter’sviewisnev
2、ershallow.Instead,thewritingrelatestheroleoflanguagetohumanity,holdingthat“Withlanguage,humanbeingsarequalifiedtocallourselvesthemostadvancedcreatures.”SuchaviewpointiscomparativelyrareamongSs.Thewriteralsoadoptsaseriesofstrategiesinwriting,forexample,makingcomparisonandcontrastbetweenhumanandanim
3、allanguage,givingexamplesof“harmony.”Thoseevidenceandexampleswellsupportthewriter’sargumentsandmaketheclaimconvincing.Language:Weareinapositiontosaythatthewriterhasarelativelystrongcommandoflanguageskills.Theideasarefullyandclearlyexpressed.Thereareavarietyofsentencestructures.Whatismostnotableist
4、hattheideasflownaturallyandsmoothly,thankstotheeffectiveuseofthelanguage.Structure:Theessayisreader-friendlyinthatithasaclearstructure.Intheopeningparagraph,thewriternicelynavigatesreaderstothetopicsentence“languageplaysmanyroles”.Thenthewriteridentifiesthreemajorrolesoflanguage:thesymbolofhumanbe
5、ings,anexpressionofideas/feelings,andthecarrierofculture.Thewriterstartseverybodyparagraphwithacleartopicsentence,explainingeachroleofthelanguagewithexamplesoranalysis.Theessaythenconcludeswithasummaryofthemainideas“languageplayssomanyimportantrolesthattheycan’tbelistedouttotally.”Generallyspeakin
6、g,thisessayhasanicestructure.Still,theconcludingparagraphisnotsatisfyingenough.Theconcludingparagraphismeanttoremindreadersofthemainideaandthesisoftheessay,notstartingnewtopics.However,thewriterproposesthat“weneedtocherishandprotectourlanguage,”whichisanewclaimandneedsmoreexplanationandsupport.Als
7、othelastsentenceisanideanotrelevanttothetopic.Suchsentences,thoughquitecommonamongChinesestudents,shouldbeavoidedinEnglishwriting.Translation沟通中的“‘你’最大”原则莉儿·朗兹1为什么“你”是如此有力的一个词？因为当我们还是婴儿时，我们就以为自己是宇宙的中心，没有什么能大过“我”。
