科技英语写作中典型错误分析课件.ppt

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1、科技英语写作中典型错误分析专业外语——例1【汉语原句】这种新方法具有效率高、容易调整的优点。【错误翻译】Thiskindofnewmethodhavetheadvantageofhighefficiency,easyadjustment.【错误翻译】Thiskindofnewmethodhavetheadvantageofhighefficiency,easyadjustment.【正确翻译】Thisnewmethodhastheadvantagesofhighefficiencyandeasyadjustment.【错误分析】(1)不用thiskindofnewme

2、thod，汉语中的“种”如果在英语中表示只有一种东西时，不能或不必译出来，如“一种算法”，“一种方法”，“一种元素”；(2)have→has；(3)优点有两个，所以advantages→advantage；(4)优点只有两个，所以之间的连接用and而不用“，”，更不能用“、”。【正确翻译】Thisnewmethodhastheadvantagesofhighefficiencyandeasyadjustment.【错误翻译】Thiskindofnewmethodhavetheadvantageofhighefficiency,easyadjustment.例2【汉语原

3、句】本文首先讨论了这种信号的特点，然后讨论了它的产生。【错误翻译】Thispaperfirstdiscussesthefeaturesofthissignal,andthenitsgenerationisdescribed.【错误翻译】Thispaperfirstdiscussesthefeaturesofthissignal,andthenitsgenerationisdescribed.【正确翻译】Thispaperfirstdiscussesthefeaturesofthissignal,andthendescribesitsgeneration.【错误分析】语

4、法上，本句没错误。但由于这是一个并列复合句，一般来说两个并列句中的语态（有时时态）应该一致。所以做如下修改。【正确翻译】Thispaperfirstdiscussesthefeaturesofthissignal,andthendescribesitsgeneration.推荐翻译：Thispaperbeginswiththediscussiononthefeaturesofthesignal,followedbythedescriptionofitsgeneration.【错误翻译】Thispaperfirstdiscussesthefeaturesofthissi

5、gnal,andthenitsgenerationisdescribed.例3【汉语原句】这台设备的特点是操作简便，价格低廉。【错误翻译】Thefeaturesofthisdeviceareeasyinoperationandlowinprice.【错误翻译】Thefeaturesofthisdeviceareeasyinoperationandlowinprice.【正确翻译】Thefeaturesofthisdeviceareeasyoperationandlowprice.或Thedevicefeatureseasyoperationandlowprice.【错

6、误分析】本句主语是features，所以其表语不能用easyinoperationandlowinprice,而只能用名词短语,这叫做“主表对等”。如果主语是具体的东西，我们就可以说Thisdeviceisgoodinquality。【正确翻译】Thefeaturesofthisdeviceareeasyoperationandlowprice.或Thedevicefeatureseasyoperationandlowprice.推荐翻译：Thisdeviceischaracterizedby(its)easyoperationandlowprice.【错误翻译】Th

7、efeaturesofthisdeviceareeasyinoperationandlowinprice.例4【汉语原句】强调指出了光强随圆柱体直径变化的正弦规律。【错误翻译】Thesinelawofthevarianceofthelightintensitybroughtduetothevarianceofthecylinderdiameterhasbeenpointedoutemphatically.【错误翻译】Thesinelawofthevarianceofthelightintensitybroughtduetothevarianceoft