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1、校模情景作文Wordlist欢迎的横幅摊位社团welcomebannerhouse/room/shed/tent/tablestandcommunity/association/club/organization/group/teamsociety应注意：时态：一定是过去时，一直是过去时衔接：图与图之间要自然连接（连接词，非谓语，状语从句……）篇幅：每幅图的长短差不多（如何？为什么？怎么样？心情？环境？）佳句欣赏Hardlyhadwearrivedtherewhenwewereattractedbythebeautifulsightandwenoti
2、cedthattherewerebannershangingonthegate,reading“welcomestudentsandparentstoourschool”.SinceIwanttolearnEnglishincollege,wespentmostofthetimeinfrontofitsstand,enquiringinformationandreadingrelevantpapers.佳句欣赏Withmyambitionburninginmyheart,myparentsandIheldhandstogetherandyelledo
3、ut“Fighting”loudlytogether.佳句欣赏–漂亮的结尾Havingvisitedtheschool,notonlydidIfindthattheschoolwasextremelygood,butalsoIwasinspiredtoworkharder.Itstrengthenedmydesiretospendmycollegelifehere,whereIwouldbothreceiveextraordinaryeducationandleadameaningfulfour-yearlife.范文1Myparentsaccomp
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5、ignlanguages,soIhadatalkwiththeteacherwhowasinchargeofforeignlanguages.ShegavemeabriefintroductionsothatIcouldhaveadeeperunderstandingoftheuniversity.范文1Attractedbythebeautifulsongs,wereachedacornerwhereagirlwasdressedincostumeandwasperformingPekingOpera.Inthatplace,wegottoknow
6、thesocietiesestablishedintheuniversity—bicyclesociety,Englishdramasociety,operasocietyandsoon.Afterhavingvisitedtheschool,Iwasdeeplyabsorbedintheatmosphereandwasdeterminedtosparenoefforttobeadmittedintotheuniversity.MyparentsandIputourhandstogethertocheermeupforthebrightfuture.
7、优点：准确使用动词词组,文章流畅生动 不足：细节可更充分,第二段和第三段衔接不紧密范文2Luckily,Icouldgettheopportunitytopayavisittomydreamschoolwithmyparents.Nosoonerhadwearrivedattheschoolthanwecaughtsightofthebannerswhichread”2011schoolopenday.Welcomestudentsandparentstoourschool”,feelingexcited.Followingthebeautifulp
8、athleadingtothemainbuilding,wegottotheplacewherediffer
