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1、2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题04传统文化话题指导实例指导1—欢度春节DearBob,I’mgladtohearfromyou.YousaidthatyouareveryinterestedinChinesecustoms,especiallytheSpringFestival.Severaldaysbeforeit,peoplearebusyshoppingandcleaning.OntheNewYear’sEve,thewholefamilyusuallygettogethertohavedumplings,setofffireworks,andwatchTVp
2、rograms.OntheNewYear’sDay,peoplealwaysgetupearlyandputonnewclothes.Everyonelookshappyandsays"HappyNewYear"toeachother.Childrencanalsogetluckymoneyfromtheirparentsandotheradults.Whenyoutakeawalkinthestreets,youwillbestruckbythesightofbeautifuldecorations.Somedoorsaredecoratedwithredlanterns.T
3、hisissomethingaboutourSpringFestival.Andwelcometoourcountrysomeday.Bestwishes.Yours,LiMing教师点评:本文覆盖了写作任务中规定的所有内容,所使用的词汇和语法结构基本准确,语言连贯,结构完整,基本达到写作目的。但是仍有个别地方有所欠缺,有待修改和完善。1.文章没有段落,显得有些缭乱且思路不清。2.本文大多是单纯的叙述和介绍,缺少作者本人的情感和一些带有人情味的语句,读起来给人感觉颇为生硬。成稿:DearBob,I’vereceivedyourletter,andI’mgladtoheartha
4、tyouareveryinterestedinourtraditions,suchastheSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalsinChina.Bothadultsandchildrenlookforwardtothisgreatday,justlikeChristmasDayintheWest.Severaldaysbeforeit,peoplearebusyshoppingandcleaning.Thenightbefore,thewholefamilyusua
5、llygetstogethertohavedumplings,setofffire-works,andwatchTV.OnNewYear’sDay,peoplealwaysgetupearlyandputonnewclothes.Everyonelookshappyandsays"Happynewyear"toeachother.IliketheSpringFestivalbecauseIcangetluckymoneyfrommyelders.Walkingdownthestreet,youwillseemanybeautifuldecorations.Manyhomesar
6、edecoratedwithredlanternsandotherthings.Isn’ttheSpringFestivalinteresting?I’msurethatyouwillloveit.IhopeyoucanjoinusduringaSpringFestival.Bestwishes.Yours,LiMing实例指导2—美国的节日习俗及文化写作任务: 假设你是学校英语爱好者俱乐部的会员,近期此俱乐部即将筹备一场会员聚会,主题是了解美国的节日习俗及文化。你想让会员们了解一下即将到来的美国传统节日"土拨鼠节"。下面是你在网上查阅到的相关信息: DateFebrua
7、ry2ndPlaceCelebratedinAmericaandCanadaOriginBeganinGermanyinthe6thcentury;atraditionalChristianfestivalMeaningIfthegroundhogcomesoutofitsholeandseesitsshadow,therewillbe6moreweeksofwinter;ifitdoesn’tseeitsshadow,springwon’tbefaraway.EventsAyearlyfe
