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1、2014东城一模情景作文范文【篇一：2014-4高三一模情景作文】2014年海淀一模情景作文—sampleone：thisafternoon,myclassmatesandicarriedoutourplantothrowafarewellpartyforzhangqiang,whowasleavingustostudyabroad.itturnedouttobeamostmovingexperience.forpreparation,wewrote“mayourfriendshiplastforever”ontheblackboa
2、rd,andputabigbunchofflowerswithacardsaying“forourfriendzhangqiang”ontheteacher’stable.then,asqiangsteppedontotheplatformtosaygoodbyetousformally,henoticedtheflowersandalmostchoked.wecouldseetearsofsurpriseandsadnessgenerateinhiseyes,untilhehadtowipethemawaysothathecoul
3、dgoon.listeningtohisheartythanksforus,manyofuscried,too.afterthat,wetookoutthepresentthewholeclasshadpreparedforhimtogether—abig,heart-shapedboardwiththewords“thedayswespenttogether”writtenonthetopandpictureshehadtakenwithusbelow.ithadtakenusdaystogatherallthosephotosa
4、ndstickedthemcarefullyintotheshapeofaheart,butthesmilethatcrossedhisfacewhenhesawitmadeitallworthwhile.then,somebodysuggestedthatwesignhisschooluniform,andweagreedandtookactionwithoutasecondthought.minuteslater,thebackofhist-shirtwasfilledwithencouragingwordslike…,deco
5、ratedwithournamessignedindifferencecolors.zhangqiangsaidhewouldmissusandwouldcherishthisfeelingofsurroundedbyfriendsforever,andeverybodyfeltthesame.intheend,apicturewithqianginthemiddlewastakentorecordthismomentforever.knowingthatthiswouldprobablybethelasttimewecouldst
6、andtogether,everybodytriedtosmileasbrightlyashecould.aswewavedzhangqianggoodbyeforthelasttime,ifeltwarmthandproudswellupinmyheart.howluckyiamtohavethisexperience,whichasplantedinmyheartthefriendshipthatwillneverfade.(这是原文，优点自不用多说有少量语言问题和啰嗦的地方，但是瑕不掩瑜。iwillgivethisonea17
7、;senior3teachersdecidedtogiveitan18.请大家抄下范文的时候，用红笔标注和修改你认为不够好的地方，并将你认为值得学习的内容积累下来)2014年海淀一模情景作文—sampletwo：thisafternoon,wehadaspecialceremonyformyclassmatezhangqiang,forheisgoingtoleaveforamericatoattendanotherschoolthere.wefirstinvitedhimtothefrontandourmonitorgavehim
8、abunchofflowerswithanoteexpressingourwishesandblessing.justatthesightofthenote,hewastoomovedtosayawordbesides“thankyo
