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1、江苏省扬州中学高中英语书面表达练习课件共21张PPT一．审题CONTENTS大雾天，盲人帮助了普通人→让我想到一些身有残疾却做出不凡成就的人，及他们的可贵品质→由人及己，在我遇到困难时，我会...1.Summary.2.Whatqualitiesdothegreatmenwithdisabilitieshaveincommon?3.Whatwillyoudowhenmeetingwithdifficulties?Para1：Polly,lostherway,onafoggyday，washelpedbyablindman.Para2:TS:Itremindsmeofsom
2、efamouspeoplewithdisabilities.SS:Forexample...Despite_____,hestill________CS:Itistheir________that_______.Para3:TS:Followingthoseinspiringexamples,Iwill________.SS:...notbedefeated,buttreatthemasasteppingstone.CS:_____________________.二、提纲三、常见错误错误1.审题有误，导致要点不全、要点偏差错误2.篇幅安排不合理错误3.人称，时态不一致改
3、错：1.Allthepeoplethoughthecan'tliveon.2.Hespentasmuchtimeashecan.3.Hiskindnesshaveearnedmyrespect.错误4.句子太碎Example：ThestoryremindsmeofShiTiesheng,adisabledChinesewriter.Facedwithsuddenmisfortuneandlosinghisabilitytowalk,hechosetostruggleagainsthisfateinsteadofcomplaining.Hisliteraryworkshav
4、einspiredalotofpeople,includingthedisabledandthehealthy,makinghislifemeaningful.错误5.谓语缺失、重复、或句子成分糅杂改错：1.Helen,whoisafamousAmericanwriter,shewasblindanddeaf.2.Therearemanypeoplewithdisabilitiesachievesuccess.3.Thoughtheyaredisabled,buttheymadegreatcontributionstotheworld.4.AsweallknowthatH
5、elenisdisabled.5.AndanotherdisabledpeoplewhosenameisShiTiesheng,aChinesewriter.6.WhenImeetingwithdifficulty,Iwillnotgiveup.错误6.中/英/拼音混杂海伦凯勒HelenKeller史提芬霍金StephenHawking贝多芬Beethoven错误7.否定句+肯定句，可改写成insteadof/ratherthan1.Wewillnotbeafraidofthemandwemustfightwiththem.2.Hismotherdidn'tgivehim
6、up,sheencouragedhim.Wemustfightwithdifficultiesinsteadofbeingafraidofthem.Hismotherencouragedhimratherthangivehimup.1.我们不应该抱怨太多，而是应该保持积极。2.我们不要在网络上浪费过多时间和精力，我们应该学着适当使用它。3.偶像应该给青少年提供正能量，而不是竖立坏榜样。Weshouldstaypositiveinsteadofcomplainingtoomuch.WeshouldlearntousetheInternetproperlyinsteadofw
7、astingtoomuchtimeandenergyonit.Idolsshouldprovideteenagerswithpositiveenergyratherthansetabadexample.三、读范文整理笔记structure结构Sentencepatterns句型notes笔记补充笔记Para1Para2Para3三、读范文整理笔记structure结构Sentencepatterns句型notes笔记补充笔记Para1Polly,lostherway,scared,afoggyday,aid,ablindman
