英语写作基础教程(effective-Sentences-1).ppt

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1、ABasicCourseinWriting(020925)Course:EnglishWritingCredits:2(withatotalof80classsessions)Textbook:ABasicCourseinWritingInstructor:JINLIANG-CHENClass:2ND-M-01/FSize:33Classroom:136(northwingofthemainbuilding)Time:14:00–15:50pm,Sept.25,02(Wed.)Goontop13(aft

2、erbreak)EffectiveSentencesAim:Qualitiesofaneffectivesentenceandwaystoachieveeffectiveness.Correctnessalonecannotmakeagoodsentencebecauseitmaynotexpresstheideaitintendstoexpressveryclearlyorforcefully.Ithastobeeffectiveatthesametime.Qualitiesofaneffective

3、sentence:UnityCoherenceConcisenessEmphasisVarietyUnityUnitymeansthatthereisonlyonemainideainasentence;andthatthatideaiscomplete.(Unitydoesnotmeanawritercanwriteonlysimplesentences.)Alongsentenceexpressesideasthatarecloselyconnected.TheyareeitherAcentrali

4、deasupportedormodifiedbyvarioussubordinateideas,orTwoormorerelatedparallelideas.e.g.TheexplorerwhohasjustreturnedfromtheAntarcticisbusywritingreportsonhisadventuresonthatice-coveredcontinent,wherehedidnotseeanyanimalsexceptpenguins.(Thecentralidea:Theexp

5、loreriswritingreportsonhisadventuresintheAntarctic.)unityBorninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50s,hegrewuptobeafamousmusician.(Thetwopartsoftheoriginalsentencearenotlogicallyconnected,becauseamanborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50swouldnotnecessari

6、lybecomeafamousmusician.)HewasborninasmalltowninSouthChinaintheearly50s.Inhischildhoodhelikedtosingsongs.Laterheenteredaconservatory.Inthe70shebecameafamousmusician.DreamoftheRedMansionsisthebest-knownnovel.(Thisseemstobeacorrectsentence,butitsmeaningisn

7、otcomplete.“Thebest-knownnovel”shouldhavebeenmodified.)DreamoftheRedMansionsisoneofthebest-knownclassicalChinesenovel.Ofallwrittenbeforethe20thcenturyDreamoftheRedMansionsisperhapsthemostpopular.#CoherenceClearandcorrectarrangementofthepartsofasentence(连

8、贯，尤指各部分间逻辑的、有序的、完美的一致关系)Donotseparatewordsthatarecloselyrelatedunlessitisnecessary.E.g.Donotuseadanglingmodifierorputamodifierfarfromtheworditmodifies.Donotusedifferentformstoexpressparallelideas.E.g.Donotmakeunnecessarysh