我们只有一个地球

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1、我们只有一个地球桂山中学高一班黄健媚Wehaveonlyoneearth　　Dearhumanbeing，　　Haveyoueverseensuchanotice“Ablacksmellyearthwithlotsofdirtythingsonitiscryingandstruggling.”？Howterribleitis！Long，longago，theearthwashealthyandbeautiful，anditwascoveredwithheavyforestandallkindsofplants.Thewaterintheri

2、versandlakesandseaswascleanandharmless.Therewerenotsomanydisastersofnature.Peoplelivedinharmonywithnature，Whyhaseverythingchanged？Becausewehumanbeingdoalotofbadthingstoher.First，Wecutdowntheforests，destroythegrasses，andthewaterwashesawayalotofsoildowntheriversintothelakesa

3、ndseas，makingalotofplacesfloodedandmanypeoplekilledandmakinghersurfaceugly.Secondly，weuselotsofchemicalpowderinthewars，weburnplentyofcoals，gasinthefactoriesandcars，makingmuchSO2andCO2withtheheavysmokespreadintheair，soalotofpeoplesufferfromthisterribleairpollution，especiall

4、yinwinter.Asaresultofthis，thetemperatureoftheearthisgettinghigherandhigher.Itisdangerousforhumanbeing，animalsandplantstoexist.Thirdly，wepouralotofwasteandpoisonouswaterintotherivers，lakesandseas.Makingallkindsoffishes，plantsandbirdsdie　　Now，ifwegoondoingbadthingstotheearth

5、，theearthwilldie.Iftheearthdied，wherewouldwehumanbeinggo？Theearthisourcommonlivingplace.Soitiseveryone’sdutytoprotectourhome——theearth.Doremember：Wehaveonlyoneearth！　　Thisarticleisnotverylong.Ithasonlymorethantwohundredandfiftywords.Butthesentencesareveryfluentandtherearef

6、ewmistakesinit.Shedescribedthepastoftheearthandpresentdangersexistedontheearthfromthreeparts：soillosing：waterpollutionandairpollution.Atlast，shecalledonpeopletotakecareoftheearth.Shemasteredthemainideaofthecompositionandexpressedherthoughtveryclearly.AsastudentinGradeOne，I

7、thinkherstandardofexpressingthingsisverygood.Inthecomposition，shecouldusemanywordsandexpressionswhichshelearnedinthetextsandshecouldusethepresentparticipleasresultadverbial.Thestructureinthecompositionisreallyexcellent.Ithinkhercompositionisasuccess.Butifshehadspreaditmore

8、，itwouldhavebeenbetter.　　指导教师：唐雪梅