6、缺乏生气的文章,哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分,相反“有些错误,但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”,给分档次仍在最高档(21~25分)1.We met at the school gate and went theretogether early in the morning.2.Early in the morning we met at the schoolgate and went there together.3.The young man couldnot help cryingwhen he heard the bad news.4
7、.Hearing the bad news, the young mancouldnot help crying.1.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。a.My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely.b.My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It w
8、as our brave Ah Fu who had saved my littlesister bravely.①强调句