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1、高三作文讲评课学案学习目标：通过讲评学生学会修改和给作文润色。学习重难点：学生会美化自己的作文，给文章加分。前提测评作文讲评一．如何给作文定档：ASSESSMENTS(评价标准)Structure框架结构Isthearticledividedintoparts?Content内容要点Areallthedetailsstated?Areallthedetailstothepoint(切题)?Language语言表达Doesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?表达错误Ist
2、hereanyadvancedvocabularyorsentencepatterns(高级词汇和句式)?二结合此次作文作文要点：1.Description（about30words）Keywords:intheearly1980sinthe1990saround2000in2014时间表达转换：_____________________________________________________表达专业变迁或喜好：———————————————————————————————————————————————————————
3、——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————2.Analyzethereasons.(1-2points)3.Clarifyyourfavouritemajorandreasons.(1-2points)三书面表达普遍存在问题•审题不仔细，遗漏要点。•过渡不自然，单纯翻译。•逻辑不恰当，有悖常理。•表达不丰富，结构单调。•语言不地道，汉式思维。•用词不贴切，缺乏积累。•语法不正确，错误不断。•书写不规范，多词少句。四Language：Properli
4、nkingwords(恰当的连词)时间顺序first,second,then,finally,atlast,soon,immediately,suddenly……对称顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhand……转折顺序but,yet,however,while,though,otherwise，inreality,instead,nevertheless,afterall…...因果顺序because,since,as,for,thanksto,asaresu
5、lt,owingto,dueto……条件顺序aslongas,onconditionthat,if,unless，onlyif……，Provided/Providing/Suppose/Supposingthat…让步顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,wh-(what,when,where,how)+ever…….递进顺序and,what’smore,besides,inaddition,furthermore,moreover,tomakethematterworse,what’sworse…
6、…过渡性插入语Ithink,inmyopinion,I’mafraid,youknow,Asweallknow,Asiswellknown,inaword,tosumup……五Languagemistakes：1.Therearemanyreasonsaccountfor/answerforthechangesofpopularuniversitymajors.2.Facingthegraduation,inviewofourmajors,wearenevercarefulenoughtochoosetherightmajors
7、3.Whenitcomestowhyappearthisphenomenon…六Advancedsentencepatterns:1.倒装句2.复合句（定语从句，名词性从句）3.强调句型4.感叹句5.It作形式主语，形式宾语的句型6.被动语态7.非谓语动词短语8.介词（如：with,on/upondoing…）9.固定句型（如，so…that…;Thereisnodoubtthat…）10.谚语&名言七Haveatry1)Tohissurprise,peopletendtoignorethetrafficrules.(主语从句)
8、=________________________peopletendtoignorethetrafficrules.2)Hewasdelayedbytheheavytraffic,sohewaslatefortheparty.（定语，表语从句）=_______
