2009高考英语作文高分技巧指导

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1、EnglishWriting中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。提示：1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他；2、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资源；3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。要求：1、词数150左右；演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记入总词数。2、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。Howcanweorganizethepassage?Para.1MeasuresPhenomenaHarmPara.3Para.2Para.

2、1PhenomenahavelightsonordertoomuchfoodandleaveleftoversonthetableSomestudentshavethelightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavealotofleftoversonthetable.Someasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoneyandspendtoomuchonsnacksordrinks.usepapercasuallyspe

3、ndpocketmoneyonsnacks…Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.leavetapwaterrunningPara.2Harmhaveabadeffectonone’scharacterbuildingaddfinancialburdentoone’sparentsuseuptheworld’slimitednaturalresources(school)burdenwithextraexpenditure(开支).…Thebadhabito

4、fbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.Theworld’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedupsoon.Para.3Measureshaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituationeducatestudentsinschoolsetrulesstartfromoneselftaketheleadinreduc

5、ingthewaste…Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.Somestudentsleavetapwaterrunningafterwashing.Somestudentshavethe

6、lightsoninthedaytime.Somestudentsordertoomuchfoodandleavealotofleftoversonthetable.Someasktheirparentsforalotofpocketmoneyandspendtoomuchonsnacksordrinks.Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialburdentotheirparents.The

7、world’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedupsoon.Inmyopinion,weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethestudentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.117words第五档(很好)（21-25分）第四档(好)

8、（16-20分）第三档(适当)（11-15分）第二档(较差)（6-10分）第一档(差)（1-5分）书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（21-25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（