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1、英语作文讲评1、Helpstudentshowtoorganizeacomposition.2、Howtomakecorrectsentences.3、Howtouseconjunctionstomakeyourcompositionmoreperfect.LearningobjectivesandImportantpoints.假如你是心理医生Dr.Smith,你收到学生Cathy的来信。她在信中说自己很喜欢看电视,但父母担心影响学习不让她看,她有时和父母争吵,很烦恼,却不知道该怎么办。请你根据以下提示,给Cathy回信,可适当发挥。70词左右。开头和结尾
2、已给出,不计入总词数。解决方法:不要再和父母争吵;要学着理解父母;要和父母沟通想法。DearCathy,Thanksfortellingmeaboutyourproblems._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,Dr
3、.Smith作文本次作文展评:展评(一)BeginningWellbegunishalfdone.1.Herearesomeadviceforyou.(王子嫣)2.I’msorrytohearthatyouareunhappy.(孙程帅)3.Firstofall,Idon’tthinkyoushouldarguewithyourparents.Youshouldunderstandthembecausetheyhopeyoutohaveagreatfuture.Youshouldsay“sorry”tothem.(徐洁)4.Yourparentsdon’tl
4、etyouwatchTVbecausetheyworryaboutyourstudy.(李丽欣)展评(二)正文1.WatchingTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.(王子嫣)2.Youcanmakemorefriends.(王子嫣)3.Youshouldsaysorrytoyourparentsandtellthemwhatyouthink.(高萍)4.Youshouldlearntounderstandyourparentsanddon’targuewiththemanymore!(林彦汐)5.Ifyoudothat,Ithinkyour
5、parentswillletyouwatchTV.(徐洁)展评(三)Wonderfulending1.Youshouldcommunicatewithyourfriendsandlistentoyourparents.Yourparentshopeyouhaveagoodfuture.(景腾)2.Youcantellthemthatyouareundertoomuchpressure.Youneedmoretimeandfreedomtorelaxyourself.(罗世虎)3.Haveagoodtimeplayingwithyourparents.(孙程帅
6、)4.Ihopeyouwillbehappysoon!(管艺涵)5.Itcanmakeyougetonwellwithyourparents.(孟德嵘)6.Ithinkit’simportanttotalkwithyourparentsaboutyourideas.(徐洁)常见错误1.Ithinkyoucan'twatchTVtoomuch.2.Ithinkyoushouldn'targuewiththem.3.Youshouldtalkingwiththem.4.Ihopemyadvicescanhelpyou.5.Youshould_______理解yo
7、urparents.6.YoulikewatchTV.7.Youparentsdon'tletyouwatchTV.don’tthinkyoucandon’tthinkyoushouldtalkadviceunderstandwatchingYour8.Theywanttoyoucanhaveagoodfuture.9.Haveagoodluckytoyou!10.Don'tupset.11.Youknowyourparentsareloveyou.12.Yourparentsveryloveyou.常见错误youtoluckbeupsetlovelovey
8、ouverymuch佳文欣赏DearCathy,Th
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