2021秋季短文改错--学生版

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17课标ーInthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor'sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,“Speedup!""Slowdown!""Turningleft!"IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.17课标二Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!17课标三WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.

1MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.16课标二Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyouviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.16课标三Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidntseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.16四川ItisMother'sDaytoday.Thoughit'sawesternfestival,it'spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother'sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,I

2foundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom'sfiavoritiest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother'sDay!"Momwasgratefulandmoving.16浙江WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we'dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.15课标一WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we'lllivetoregretit.15课标二Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.

315浙江Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.15陕西Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,"Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!15四川Hi,Janice,It*sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasa

4time-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon'tliketogoanymore,soI'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace14课标ーNearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden.Sincethen-foralltheseyear-wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!14课标二Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn'tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassfbrarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.14辽宁DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwe'vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we'rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog-Cleo.We'vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo'searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficultto

5understandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o'clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely,JackandRose14四川Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don'tpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit'safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.14陕西MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky—theywerelookedlikerain!Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.ThatdayIdidn'tlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!14浙江

6IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.13课标ーIhardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.13新课标二ThebookI'mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800's.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o'clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain（瓷器）industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.13浙江

7DearDiary,HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone."HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI'llneverfallsleep.Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.Yours,Rosemary13辽宁Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill."Hehasruinedhishealthy.Weareworriedabouthim."Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,IpaidvisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.Ihadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim.13四川Todaywehadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetestdifficulty,butItriedhardlytodoit.SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,askingmetolethertocopymyanswers.Afterthinkforsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher'soffice.Theteacherwasangrybecausewehadsameanswersinthetests.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents.Iwasveryupset.Ididn'tcheat.Iwasjusthelpingafriend.Whydoesshepunishme?13陕西MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.

8OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.12年课标卷IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,"That'sit.Nomoretoystoyou."Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmakemytoystolast.Myattitudechangedfromthenon.12年辽宁DearDiana,Thankyouforthelovelydaywehavewithyou.ItwassokindforyoutoletusbringAnne'sfriend,Gina.Unfortunate,theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome.Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresult,therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.InthecarparkhereGinanearlygotknockedoverascardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindalorry.TheyfinallydroppedGinaoffatherparents'andmadeourownwaytohome.Mylove,Fiona12陕西MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelby

9publictransport.Welivedinacomfortablydoubleroomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.12浙江Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.Unfortunate,Ihadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,soIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,ItoldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.1I课标一Mysummertravelstartedterribly.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangZhou.IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatIwouldgotoXiamenforlongholiday.IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket,buttheonlyclothesIhadwasthoseIhadon.Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.WhenIfinallyarrivedatmyfriendhelenttomelotsofclothes.IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast.17济南ー模StudyingintheUKhavebeenagoodexperienceforme.WhenIfirstarrived,IfindlifeveryhardasIdidn'tknowanybodyhere,butIsoongottoknowotherChinesestudentattheuniversity.LaterIbecameinterestingincommunicatingwithpeoplefromvariouscultures,andImadefewerfriends.

10Duringmystudy,Ichosetoliveinwithmyclassmatesinthedormitory.IthinkiビsbetterthanlivinginBritishfamilybecauseIcanmeetpeoplefromdifferentcountrieseasy.Thecourseshereareexcellent.Ienjoythewaytheteachersgivelessons.Weareencouragedtothinkforyourselves,whichisquitedifferentfromthatIhaveexperiencedbefore.17济南二模DearRose,Howareyougettingalongwith?IknowyouwantfindajobinBeijing.Ireadanadinthenewspaper,whichsaysthatBeijingLadderInstitutehasanEnglishcourseofchildrenandgrown-up.Theyneedanative-speakerEnglishteacher,whomusthaveanuniversitydegreeineducationoranotherrelatedfieldsandaforeignexpertcertificate.Ithinkyouaretherightpersontheywanted.Iftheyareinterestedinit,pleasedirectcallorwritetotheInstitute.Thetelephonenumberis086-010-68019433,theFaxnumberis086-010-68019434,buttheire-mailaddressisLHceby@hotmail.com.Goodluck.Yours,Joanna16年济南3月ー模DearSteven,I'mgladthatyouarecomingtoBeijingthissummervacation.Youaskedmanyquestioninyourletter,andnowletmeanswerthem.Tostartwith,Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isveryattractivecitywithalonghistory.YoucanfoundallkindsofdeliciousfoodinBeijing,ofthatthemostfamousistheroastBeijingduck.Ihopewewillenjoyit.Besides,thereisagreatnumberoftouristattractionsworthvisiting,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalaceortheForbiddenCity.Thesescenicspotshaveattractedmillionsof

11touristsinthisyear.IpromiseyouwillhaveawonderfullytimehereinBeijing.I'mlookingforwardtohearfromyouassoonaspossible.Yours,LiuChao16年济南二模Afewdaysagowhentakingthewalkwithmymotherinthepark,Icameacrossaforeigner.Judgedbyhispuzzledexpression,Ithoughthemightinneedofhelp.SoIwentupandaskedwhetherIcouldhelphiminEnglish.Hetoldmehehadgotlost.Hehadturnedtoseveralpasser-byforhelp,andtheycouldn'tspeakEnglish.Thenhetoldmehisdestination.Fortunately,Iwasquitefamiliartotheplace.Inordertomakemyselfunderstand,Itoldhimhowtogothereasclearaspossible.AlthoughitwasthefirsttimethatIhavetalkedtoaforeignerfacetoface,hetotallyunderstoodwhatIsaidandthankedforme.16济南高三针对性训练Ipaidavisittoaseniormiddleschoolinlastweek.It'sabigschoolwithabeautifulfountaininthecenteroftheschoolyard.Westartourvisitfromthemainbuilding.Firstwewenttothelabbuildingthatsomestudentsweredoingexperiments.Thenwevisitedlecturehallbehindthelabbuilding.Theremanystudentswereattendingalecturegiventoaprofessor.Oppositetothelecturehallweretheartcenter.Inthecenterwesawagroupofstudentplayingmusicalinstruments.Finallytheygottotheplaygroundatthefarbackoftheschool.Someboyswerehavingafootballgame.Itwassoexcitedthatwecouldn'thelpcheerforthem.Itwasreallyanimpressivevisit.15年济南ー模Beijinghaslotsoffamoustouristattractions.Everyyearmanytouristcomeheretoenjoyitsbeautifulsceneryandrichculture.Butseveralyearsago,visitorsbehavebadly.

12Sometalkedloudlyinpublicandthrewlittereverywhere.Somepickedflowers,cuttingdowntreesandhurtanimals.Andevenbetter,somepaintedonthewallsandsmokedinthewoods.Luckily,thingshaschanged.Rubbishisalwaysputintodustbins.Peoplearefriendlyatanimals.Everybodysmokesinthewoods.Allthesechangesmakeushappily.Asstudent,Ithinkweshouldknowit'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Let'stochangeourbehaviorswhenwetravel.15年济南二模MyclassmatesandItakepartinawildnesssurvivalprogramfromJuly10thtoJuly13ththissummer.Beforewestarted,wegivenacompass,amap,afirst-aidkit,tents,food,anyclothesandsoon.Onthewayweclimbedthreemorehillsandswamacrosstworivers.Welostourwayintheforest.Luckywefoundtherightdirectionwithacompass.Assoonastheyarrivedatthecampsite,weputupourtents,madeafireandthenstartedcooking.Wealsolearnedwhattogivefirst-aid.Throughtheprogram,welearnedtouseknowledgegaininginclasstosolveproblem.Itwasquiteanunforgettableexperienceforme.17潍坊ー模Lastweekend,IwenttovisitmyEnglishteacher,whowasalreadyinhisfifty.HegivesmealotofhelpwhenIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent.Delightingtoseeme,heaskedmyseniormiddleschoollife.Thenheadvisedmetomakefullypreparationsforthecomingentranceexamination.ItwassoapleasuretoseehimagainthatIdidn'tnoticeitwasprettylater.Ihadtosaygoodbyetoeachother.Heisnotonlyagoodteacherbutmyclosefriend.WhereverIwillgo,IwillalwaystreasureatimethatIspentwithmyteacher.17年潍坊二模

13DearSir/Madam,IhavereceivedthesneakersthatIbuyfromyouronlineshop.Withtheexcitement,Iunwrappedthepackagebutfoundsomethingwrongwiththem.SoI'mwritingtoinformyoutheproblems.First,thecolorofthesneakersthatIwantareredinsteadofblack.Second,size41istoolargeforthem.Thatannoysmemostisthatthereareseverallittlestainononeofthesneakers.Theyreallylookawfully.Ifputtinginmysituation,howwouldyoufeel?I'dliketochangethispairforanewoneandgivemethemoneyback.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,LinMing17年潍坊三模DearEditor,NowmanystudentshaveiPodsandregardthemastheirmostfavorite.UseaniPod,wecanlistentomusic,downloadalotoflearningmaterialsandreaditonthescreen.Apparently,itisgreathelptoourstudy,especialtoourEnglishlistening.Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPodstoclassroomandlistentomusicwithearphones,whichmakestheteacherandotherstudentsgreatlyannoying.What'sbad,someofthemevenwasteprecioustimeinclassplayvideogames.Inmyopinion,classroomisaplacethatstudentsshouldconcentrateinstudy.Furthermore,somerulesshouldbemadetoguidethestudentstouseiPodproperly.Yourssincerely,LiHua16年潍坊ー模Lifeisanmysteryandwewillneverknowthatwhatiswaitingforus.Butonethingisforsure:problemsareunavoidable.Forus,it9stheprocessofsolvingproblemsthathelpusgrow.Makeaspeechusedtobeabigproblemforme.Withastrongaccentandterribly

14pronunciation,Ifailedinspeechcompetitionmanytimes,but1didn'tholdback.Inthecontrary,Iconsidereditagoodchanceformetoimprovemyself.Irecordedmyspeech,listeningtoitandcorrectedmypronunciation.NowI'mconfidentenoughtogivemybestspeechtoyouall.Mydearfriends,don'tafraidofproblems,buttakeadvantageofittobethebestofourselves!16年潍坊二模Oneday,anoldmanwasreturninghomeaftershopping.Suddenly,abagofwastefellinthesky,nearlyhittinghimonhishead.Hewasgreatlyfrighteningbytheunexpectedincident.Droppedthethingshehadboughttotheground,heranawayrapidly.Whatdangerousitwas!Obviously,theaccidentcausedbyacarelessneighbourlivinghighlyinanapartment.Itwasthatpersonwhowastoblamefor.Everyoneofusshouldbehavepolitelyandthinkmoreaboutother.Onlywhenweeachbehavedproperlycanoursocietybechangedintoapleasingone.16年潍坊三模I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.YouaskedmewhatIwouldpreparemyselfforthecomingcollegeentranceEnglishexambutI'vesummarisedseveralpointsforyou.Firstly,I'llreviewallthe3,500wordonebyoneandpayspeciallyattentiontotheimportantones.Secondly,I'lllistentotheEnglishtwiceadaysothatIcangetfullmarksinthelisteningpart.Besides,dailyreadingandwritingexercisescanhelpmegainmoreconfidenceasbefore.Anotherpointthatshouldneverbeignoredwasthathandwritingisthekeytogetamuchhigherscore.Ihopeourplanscanbegreatbenefittoyou.GoodluckwithyourEnglishstudy.15年潍坊ー模Asweallknow,everyonehaveadream.IhavedreamedofbeingadoctorsinceI

15enteredintotheprimaryschool.Nowadayswithmodernlifegorapidly,manypeoplesufferfromdifferentkindofdiseases,bothmentallyandphysically.Asaresult,doctorsareingreatneedathomeandabroad.Mydreamistobecomesuccessfuldoctor,helpingtosavepeople'slives.Althoughtobeagooddoctorwasverydifficult,IwilldowhateverIcantokeepeveryonehealth.Tomakemydreamcometrue,IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI'llconcentratemoretostudies.Afterall,onlybyworkinghardlycanonesucceed.15年潍坊二模DearJack,Welcometomyschool!Uponyourarrival,therewillbeapartyforyouorganizingbymyclassmates.YoumayattendtoEnglishclassestofeeladifferentlylearningstyle.Afterthat,youcangotoyourhostfamilythatyoucanexperiencetheChinesewayoflife.Youcanhavemealstogetherchattingaboutwhateverinterestyou.Thehostfamilywillalsoshowyouoffsomefamousscenicspots.Youcanseepeoplesellingkiteseverywherebecauseourcitywashometokites.Therearevarietiesofkitestochoose.Soisn'tthatagoodideatobuysomeforyourfriends?Writetomeunlessyouhaveanyquestionsabouttheschedule.Yours,LiHua