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1、2011年12月大学英语六级考试TheWaytoSuccessSuccessissomethingeveryonelooksfor,longsforanddiesfor.Buthaveyoueverconsideredwhatsuccessis?Somemayholdthatsuccessmeansonehasbeautifullife,likeprettyhouse,coolcarsandgreatpower.It’sindeedonewaytodefinesuccess.Buttome,successisdoingsomethingonereallyfeelslikedoing.Toac
2、hievethiskindofsuccess,onehastobearinmindthreeessentialprerequisites,namelyknowingwhereyourinterestreallyliesin,possessingthestrongwilltopursueyourinterestandhavingthediligencetorealizeyourdream.Inotherwords,theyare“what”“why”and“how”ofsuccess.It’sreallyluckilygoodforone,especiallyfortheyoungergene
3、rationoftodaytofindtheirdreams,followthemandintheend,makethemcometrueandbecomesuccessful.Althoughit’snevereasytosucceed,progressingwiththestrongwillanddiligencetowardstherightdirection,you’llbetheone!【作文解析】这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题”whatissuccess?”,但并没有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨，而是直接引出了自己的观点：successisdoingsomethingonereal
4、lyfeelslikedoing.算是立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第二段对这种成功背后的三种必要条件做出了阐述。整体看，行文流畅，用语规范地道。本篇亮点：1.排比词组或句子的运用：Successissomethingeveryonelooksfor,longsforanddiesfor.…namely,knowingwhereyourinterestreallyliesin,possessingthestrongwilltopursueyourinterestandhavingthediligencetorealizeyourdream.2.bearinmind3.liein4.strongw
5、illtopursueyourinterest本文有待提高之处：1.文中人称有些混乱。有些使用第二人称代指读者，有些又以第三人称指代，建议统一。2.结构上，一般情况下我们建议考生使用典型的“三段式”，即，提出问题、分析问题、解决问题。该作者基本上遵循了这个原则，但第三段更多的却是重复了第二段的中心思想，并没有起到很好的总结作用。如果第三段，作者可以与第一段的“成功定义”相呼应，例如：即使没有这些身外之物，但心灵上的满足，梦想的实现，才是我心中成功的本质。整体看，文章在语言表达和立意上还不错。但在文章结构上有些松散，有待提高。【高分版】TheWaytoSuccessFirstessay—str
6、eamofthoughttypeTheWaytoSuccess"Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-ninepercentperspiration."Andherecomesourquestion,whatisthewaytosuccess?Astrongwillandgreateffortsarethemostessentialtwokeystothedoorofsuccess.Whydopeoplefailtoachievetheirgoal?Thereasonisthatmostofthemgiveuphalfwayduetotheirlack
7、ofastrongwilloncetheyencounteranydifficulty.Amanofastrongwillalwaysstickstohiscausenomatterhowtoughitmightbe.WouldThomasEdisonbesuchagreatmaninhistoryifhehaddonenothingbutpossessingastrongwill?Weareallfamil
