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2、Youhavetobelieve,thereisaway.Theancientssaid:"thekingdomofheavenistryingtoenter".Onlywhenthereluctantstepbysteptogotoit'stime,mustbemanagedtogetonestepdown,onlyhavestruggledtoachieveit.--GuoGeTech雅思教父刘洪波：旅游类雅思作文高分范文及点评雅思教父刘洪波2010权威作品《最简化雅思写作》8月光芒上市从零开始，单词、词组、句式、思想完全应对官方四大评分标准最新研

3、发最简化15句写作框架模板涵盖雅思题库各类型高分范文幽默通俗的语言手把手教出写作高分中国区前任雅思考官强力推荐1.旅游Internationaltravelisbecomingcheaper,andcountriesareopeningtheirdoorstomoreandmoretourists.Dotheadvantagesofincreasedtourismoutweighitsdisadvantages?Airtravelcombinedwithearlyretirementandpeoplewithmoneytospendhasmeantthat

4、moreandmorepeoplecantraveltheworld.Somecountries,especiallythosewithfamoushistoricalsightsandbeautifulnaturalscenerytrytoattractthislargemarket.Whiletherearesomeproblemsthatcanbecausedwithallthistravel,generallyitisapositivething.Firstly,considerthatallthesetouristsmeanmoneythatgo

5、vernmentsareeagertotapinto.Formanycountries,tourismisabigpartofGDPandwithoutittheireconomieswouldsuffer.Foreigntouristsbringimportantdollarstotheserviceindustryandlotsofsmallshopsandvendors.Secondly,byencouragingtourismgovernmentsarepromotingtheircitiesandcountries.Inmycountry,Chi

6、na,forexample,increasedtourismandhostingtheOlympicshaschangedpeople’sperceptionofourcountry.Atthesametime,tourismallowslocalpeopletogainexposuretopeoplefromothercountries,whichisalsoagoodthing.Ofcourseit’snotalwaysaperfectpicture.Notalltouristshaveagoodattitudeandmanners.Andinsome

7、casestheymayevenhaveanegativeinfluenceonthelocalpopulation.Butthesesituationsarenotsocommon,andembassiescancreatetoughguidelinesforgettingavisa.Thisseemslikeareasonablecompromise.Toconclude,internationaltravelisagreatthing,butitisaprivilegethatshouldnotbeabused.Governmentsshoulden

8、courageit,butalsoputinplacemeasurestokeepdangerouspeopleaway.Thiswillresultinawin-winsituationforeveryone.(251words)Harvey点评：写作线索：首段，国际旅游利大于弊；第二段，刺激本国经济；第三段，加深双方了解；第四段；不利之处。末段总结。本文我们看到加汉老师是以一位中国学生的口吻写出来。他曾告诉我他的中文名字有两个含义：加拿大的男子汉；加入汉族。第四段的观点比较抽象，其实针对国际旅游的弊端，我们可以谈对旅游资源的过度开发；旅游景点的环保压力

9、；对当地居民生活方式的影响；经济过渡依赖于旅游业的后果等等。如果我