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2、sSpaceReinhardMieterourhandwrittennotes,writeayallRENVERESTATESustbeonsameflooroneofficeof10m40parkingspacesOPERAPLACE(OP)CENTRALTOWER(CT)TO:FROM:SUBJECT:FurthertoourdiscussionlastweekwehavenowdecidedtorentofficespacefromyouRentingOfficeSpaceforthenexttwelvemonths:Requirements••m•Pleaseconfirmifthis

3、officespaceisvacantinCentralTower.iteontheoppositepage.rouworkforBusinessSpaceplc,acompanywhichrentsfullyservicedofficestootherusinesses.Youhavejustreceivedthefaxbelow.bLookatthefaxandtheotherinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingWrite120–140words.Officescurrentlyv

4、acantCT19SizemCT24CT53CT54Officescurrentlyvacant10OP3420SizemOP3915OP4615OP47OP48OP49102010152015PARTTWO•Y••••W4toEricaYoung,whoisorganisingthemeeting:e-mailyingwhowillgo.xplainingwhyyoucannotgoaapologisingfornotbeingabletogotothemeetingEricaYoungMeetingONEouarearegionalsalesmanagerforaninternationa

5、lcompany.Youhavebeenaskedtogotoaiteanr••e•siteontheoppositepage.rmeetingatyourcompany’sheadoffice.Youcannotgo,sosomebodyelsewillgoinyourplace.Write40–50words.PART•Y•W••W2Page51BECVANTAGEWRITINGPART1CANDIDATEAI’mreallysorrybutI’mnotabletogotothemeetingatourcompany’sheadoffice.Ican’tattendbecauseofpre

6、viousarrangementswhichIcan’tchange.MrJanKorwalski,averygoodworker,willgoinsteadofme.Pleaseacceptmyapologies.MartaStefanskaEXAMINERCOMMENTSAllpointscovered.Successfulattemptatcomplexlanguage,Band5forexample‘Ican’tattendbecauseofpreviousarrangements’,‘willgoinsteadofme’.Concise,makingaverypositiveeffe

7、ctonthereader.CANDIDATEBDearMrsYoungIwouldliketoapologisefornotbeingabletogotomeetingatourcompany’sheadofficebecauseIwillnotbeinthecountry.IamgoingonthebusinesstriptoItaly.MrMarkSmithwillgoinsteadofme