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1、Howtogethighgradesinthewritingtask?GuideforEnglishwriting英语作文写作指导谷城三中帅德胜Reviewofthewritingtaskinthe2012CollegeEntranceExamination请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Youcannotchoosewhatyouaregiven,butyoucanchoosehowyoumakeuseofit.注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语;②除诗歌外，文体不限;③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;④词数为120左右。A
2、student’swritingIrememberwhenmybirthday,mymotherbuymeapresent.Itwasacelphone.Iwasveryhappy,becauseIdidn’tthinkshewouldbuyacelphoneforme.WhenIwasatschool,Ioftensentmessagestomyclassmates,sometimesIplaygamesonit.Mystudyfelldownsharply.Myteachertoldmymother.Mymotherwasangryands
3、coldme.Irealizemymistake.Ishouldnotusecelphoneforplaying.Ishoulduseitforgoodgoal.Fromthenon,Ibegantostudyhard.Iwillusethecelphonewell.Ican’tchoosewhatisgiven,butIwillmakegooduseofit.10Conclusionofcommonmistakesandproblemsinthewriting1.Awholepassage,noparagraphdivided2.Direct
4、translationandChinglishexpression3.Verbtensesnotinagreement4.Impropersentencepatterns5.Driftingoffthetopicorleavingoutsomerequiredinformation6.spellingmistakeswithoutanyadvancedvocabularyorsentencesEnjoyanddiscussSeeingthetopic,allthatcomestomymindisTIME.Noonecandecidetheamo
5、untoftimegivenbyGod,sohowtomakeuseofitreallymakesadifference.Justasthesayinggoes,timeislimitedandlosttimeisneverfoundagain,whichevidentlyshowsustheimportanceoftreasuringtime.However,Ididn’trealizeituntilIcameacrossafailureinabigexam.ItwasinSenior2thatIbegantoplaycomputergame
6、s.SoonIgotsoaddictedtothemthateverynightIslippedoutofschooltoplaycomputergames.Asaconsequence,IsleptinclassinthedaytimeandmystudiesfellsharplybeforeIcouldrealizemymistake.PrecioustimeslippedawayinmydreamsandcomputergamesandthereforeIfailedinthefinalexam.Lookingatthepoormarks
7、,howIwishIhadn’twastedsomuchtimeplayingcomputergameswhenIshouldhavestudiedhard.Afallintothepit,againinyourwit.Everyminutecounts.NowIcompletelyunderstandtheimportanceoftreasuringtime.Frommyperspective,timemeanslife.Onlybyseizingeverysecond,canwehaveabrightfuture.howtogethighg
8、rades?advancedvocabulary.colourfulsentences,especiallyincludingsomeclauses(
