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1、考生便条中典型错误实例分析1格式错误格式错误主要是日期(Date),称呼(Heading)和结尾(Ending)缺失,不全,写错或位置错误,标点遗忘或错用,大小写错误等.错误一:不正确的日期格式标点有误:如April232006；April.23.2006；4,23rd2006；23rd.Apri.2006；Apri.23,2006；April23th,2006.顺序有误:按照汉语习惯,将日期写在便条末尾,或完全按照汉语日期的写法写成2006,4,23.错误二:不正确的称呼格式称呼与日期写在同一行:DearMichael,23rdApril称呼不规范:如ToMichael,
2、HelloMichael错误三:不正确的结尾,写成YourclassmateMary,YoursMary,Sincerely,Yours,sincerely或遗漏此部分.2内容错误错误一:便条开头不当,如Nicewritingtoyou.,I'mAngela.,I'myourclassmateYama.便条应开门见山,而不应当罗嗦.错误二:遗漏所要求的内容或内容不够具体,如Pleasetellmethetimeandplacefortheexcursion(内容不够具体)错误三:写些不相关的话,如Ilovetravelingverymuch.AndI'mgladtohear
3、thatyoualsohavesomeexperienceinit.一个典型的例子是"Ienjoytravelingverymuch.Itpresentsusbeautyofourcountryandgivesusopportunitiestoknowoursociety.ButIhavejustvisitedseveralplacessofar.Ontheonehand,Idon'thavesomuchtime;ontheotherhand,Iseldomhaveopportunities.Thistimeitisanopportunityforme."字数为55字,相当
4、于整个便条所需字数,而此部分的内容仅涉及写便条人对远足的兴趣,与主要内容不相关.3语言错误虽然便条的字数只有50~60个字,但是学生的语法错误和用词混淆等语言问题层出不穷.错误一:语法错误时态错误:Iwouldliketojointheexcursionyouorganized.(应改为areorganizing)I'minterestedinthiskindofactivitiesverymuch,soIwritetoyouandaskaboutsomemoredetails.(应改为amwriting)Couldyoupleasetellmetheplacewherew
5、emeet.(应改为willmeet)Iwanttoknowthetimeweleft.(应改为willleave/areleaving)Pleasecallmeifyouhadtimebeforeyoustarttheexcursion.(应改为have)Iheardthatyouwereorganizingaweekendexcursion.(应改为areorganizing)YouknowI'mfreethisweekend,soIreallywanttojointhistrip.(应改为willbe)冠词错误:You'reorganizingaexcursionfo
6、rtheclass.(应改为an)语序错误:Ineedtoknowwhenwillwecomeback,forI'llhaveotherthingstodoonSundayafternoon.(宾语从句中表疑问也用陈述句语序,应改为wewill)一致性错误:I'dliketojoinyou,butthere'safewquestionsIwanttoask.(主谓不一致,应改为are)CanIjoinyoutoenjoyourselves(代词与先行词不一致,应改为myself)动词形式的误用:IamwonderifIcanjoinyoufortheexcursion.(应
7、改为wonder/amwondering)Wecanhavesomegameswhenwearerest.(应改为arehavingarest/areresting)句子中逗号误用:I'mveryinterestedinthistrip,I'dliketogowithyou.以上例句错误地将两个完整的句子用逗号连接,而没有用连接词,改正方法是用并列连词或从属连词把两个句子连接起来.即I'dliketogowithyoubecauseI'mveryinterestedinthistrip.或I'mveryintere
