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1、Revisingsentences修改句子TheforthstepofessaywritingThesestrategieswillhelpyoutoreviseyoursentenceseffectivelysothatyoursentencesflowsmoothlyandclearly.UsingParallelismAllitemslistingtwoormorewords,phrases,orclauses,needtobewritteninthesamegrammaticalstructure.Forexample,b
2、alanceanounwithanoun,aphrasewithaphrase,aclausewithaclause.Manypeopleareinterestedincombatwhentheyreadaboutitathome,studyaboutitinschool,orwatchingitontelevision.Revision:Manypeopleareinterestedincombatwhentheyreadaboutitathome,studyaboutitinschool,orwatchitontelevisi
3、on.UsingParallelismwithPairsWhentwoideasareincluded,theymustbeparallel.Touristsenjoyviewingairshowsonmilitarybasesandtoexaminedisplaysofarmorinmuseums.Revision:Touristsenjoyviewingairshowsonmilitarybasesandexaminingarmordisplaysinmuseums.UsingParallelismPutwordslinked
4、bycoordinatingconjunctionsinparallelform.Themartialartsstressthestudyofhandtechniqueandhowyoukick.Revision:Themartialartsstressstrengtheningthehandsandthefeet.UsingParallelismCorrelativeconjunctions(either/or,neither/nor,both/and,whether/or)requireparallelform.InKungF
5、uthehandsmustbenotonlyhardenoughtoknockdownaman,butalsotheirsensitivitymustfeelwhichwaythewindblows.Revision:InKungFuthehandsmustbebothhardenoughtoknockdownamanandsensitiveenoughtofeelwhichwaythewindblows.UsingParallelismComparisonsusingthanorasneedparallelform.ThePre
6、sidentwouldratherusediplomacythanagreeingtosendtroopsabroad.Revision:ThePresidentwouldratherusediplomacythanagreetosendtroopsabroad.UsingParallelismByrepeatingthepreposition,thearticles,orthesubordinatingconjunctions,theparallelismbecomesclearerandmoreeffective.Thepea
7、cenegotiatorspromisedtohelpoutinthedayornight.Revision:Thepeacenegotiatorspromisedtohelpoutinthedayorinthenight.CheckingforParallelismCheckitemslistedinaseries.Useaparallelgrammaticalstructureforallitems.Checkplaceswherecoordinateorcorrelativeconjunctionsareused.Check
8、sentenceswhereyouusethanandas.ParallelismReviewExercisesInthe18thcentury,FranzMesmertreatedpatientsbyusingironmagnetsandhypn
