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1、专业英语四级阅卷(2009年5月11日起至5月21日,上海外国语大学逸夫图书馆。)PARTVIWRITING[45MINI]SECTIONACOMPOSITION[35MIN] TourismisaboomingbusinessinChina.However,somepeopleworrythattoomanytouristsmaybringharmtotheenvironment,whileothersdon’tthinkso.Whatisyouropinion?WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEacompositi
2、onofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic: WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment? Youaretowriteinthreeparts. Inthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyouropinionis. Inthesecondpart,provideoneortworeasonstosupportyouropinion. Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalcon
3、clusionormakeasummary. Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks. SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING[10MIN] WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation: Lily,yourroommat
4、e,islookingforapart-timejobinthecomingsummervacation.YousawanadforaprivateEnglishtutorforaschoolboy.Writeheranote,tellingherwhatthejobisandstronglyrecommendingittoher.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriatenessI.评分标准:1.作文题目“WillTourismBringHarmt
5、otheEnvironment?”作文总分15分,其中:内容占7分:0.5-1-1.5-2-2.5-3-3.5-4-4.5-5-5.5-6-6.5-7语言占6分:0.5-1-1.5-2-2.5-3-3.5-4-4.5-5-5.5-6写作规范占2分:0.5-1-1.5-2(指卷面、标点等)2.note-writing总分10,其中:格式占2分(日期、称呼)内容占2分(两点:看到有关信息、极力推荐,各一分)语言占6分(拼写、语法、语体得体等)II.存在的问题:1.部分离题现象比较严重(题目:WillTourismBringHarmtot
6、heEnvironment?)文章主要写tourism的好处,而不谈与环境的关系。文章主要写保护环境的重要性,而不谈tourism与保护环境的关系。文章即写发展tourism的好处也写发展tourism的弊端,最后得出发展tourism利大于弊,或者是既要发展tourism又要保护环境。谈到tourism对环境造成污染,但着重说明如何解决tourism造成的污染,如:政府应该制订法律法规约束人们的行为、提高人们的素质、唤醒人们的环保意识。/或者谈到tourism对环境的破坏,但着重分析为什么,如:人们素质低、地方政府追求眼前利益2.
7、思辨能力有待提高在论证tourism不会对环境造成污染,许多学生是这样论证的:Peoplecometoappreciatethebeautifulscenery,nottopollutetheenvironment,sotheywillnotpollute.或:Itisourselvesnottourismthatbringharm.或:Theythrowrubbish,butIpickup,sotourismbringsnoharmtotheenvironment.或:人们去旅游就要带吃的、喝的。吃喝完就要扔掉,吃喝完还要上厕所,
8、而厕所的数量有限,人们在树林里随地小便。所以会造成污染。学生的语言能力有待提高单词的拼写错误十分严重,如垃圾(rubbish)的拼写有:rabbish,rabbit,baggage等。语法错误多,如Tourismbringharmto