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1、写作基础优化句子的四种常用方法篇章结构连贯的常用词语整合信息的十种语言手段优化句子的四种常用方法一、同位语手段二、运用并列句三、运用短语四、运用从句此方法多用于介绍人物、事物或地点等。[例1]介绍事物(2008广东)背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。Shooting,ameansofsurvivaloriginally,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.同位语手段[例2]介绍人物(2009广东)时间:上周末对象:眼科医生(eye-doctor)
2、王教授主题:我国中小学生近视(eye-sightedness)问题Lastweekend,IhadaninterviewwithProfessorWang,aneye-doctor,concerningtheissueofshort-sightednessoftheschoolchildreninChina.[例3]介绍地点姓名：李华身份：育才中学学生职位：学生会主席校址：你们大学附近I’mLiHua,ChairmanoftheStudentUnionofYucaiMiddleSchool,whichisclosetoyou
3、runiversity.1.(翻译)李敏是个女孩子,今年18岁,她在光华中学学习,她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。运用1.LiMing,agirlof18,myneighbourandmybestfriend,isstudyinginGuanghuaMiddleschool.2.(整合)GuangzhouisthecapitalofGuangdongProvince.ItislocatedinthemiddleofGuangdongProvince.ItisthecultureandeconomycenterofGuangdo
4、ngProvince.2.Guangzhou,thecapitalandthecultureandeconomiccenterofGuangdongProvince,islocatedinthemiddleofGuangdong.3.(整合)ZhangHaiismale.Heis23yearsold.HegraduatedfromHunanNormalUniversitylastyear.3.ZhangHai,male,23yearsold,graduatedfromHunanNormalUniversitylastyear
5、.常用的并列连词有and,but,or,otherwise,nor,so,yet,however,for,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,either…or,neither…nor,(and)then,since等。运用并列句[例4]他不喜欢音乐，也不喜欢运动。[一般]Hedoesn’tlikemusic.Hedoesn’tlikesports,either.[高级]Helikesneithermusicnorsports.[例5]我不喜欢他，他很自私。[一般]Idon’tlikehim.
6、Heisselfish.[高级]Idon’tlikehim,forheisselfish.4.Heworkshardhimself.Heencouragesustoworkhard,too.运用用连接词整合下列句子。4.Henotonlyworkshardhimselfbutalsoencouragesustoworkhard.5.Theseglassesareveryexpensive.Pleasebecarefulwiththem.5.Pleasebecarefulwiththeglasses,fortheyarever
7、yexpensive.6.HalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols.48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.6.HalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridolswhile48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.7.Accordingtotheprofessor,thecauseofshort-sightednessisverycomplicated.Nomedicinecancureit.7.A
8、ccordingtotheprofessor,thecauseofshort-sightednessisverycomplicated,sonomedicinecancureit.8.Iamgoodatexpressingmyself.Ihavethelanguageadvantageov
