[学习计划]cet-4作文讲解1包括要求趋势评分样板顺序高分词汇句型

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1、CET-4作文讲解评分标准四级作文使用率最高的12个基本句式四级高分的词汇搭配WomenintheModernWorldWomenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningoveneralso.Theyleadotherpeoplecomtral,andmakeoutplans.Therearem

2、anywomenscientistalso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Inancient,women’spositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.Theyareequaltoherhusb

3、and.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingswithherhusband,dowhatshewantstodo.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealize,women’slikertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen

4、.Everyoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.I’msure,theliberationofwomenwouldbeincreased.评分样卷(1)5分基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。Womenareplayinganincreasingimportantpartinsocietytoday.Moreandmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookingafterthechildren.Womenhaveentere

5、dmanyfieldsofsocietyincludingscientificfield.Asweknow,manywomensportsteamshavewontheworld’schampionsuchasChineseWomen’sVolleyballTeam.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,woman’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandsarenotthemastersofwivesinmanyplaces.Husbandsandwifeareequaln

6、ow.Theyjointogethertoovercomedifficultiesandsharehappiness.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Alsoinsomeplaces,womenareconsideredbeing“things”belongtomen.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjobs.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequaljob.Thisisaproblemmustbesolvednot

7、onlybysocietybutalsobywomenthemselves.WomenintheModernWorld评分样卷(2)11分切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Manywomentodayareplayinganimportantpartatworksthatwasthoughtonlycouldbedonebythemenbefore.Forexample,somewomenarenotsecret

8、aryintheoffice,instead,the