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1、第一段：漫画描述，重点是母女之间的对话内容，从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性，家长[微博]干涉孩子过多。 第二段：可以分析此现象产生的原因。 第三段：采取措施解决此现象。 Howimpressivethecartoonisindescribingthemostwidespreadsocialphenomenonconcerningtheindependenceofthechildren.Let’stakeacloserlookatthedrawing,thegirltoldhermothe
2、rshewasacceptedbytheuniversityofhermother’schoicewithpride.Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotthedrawingitself,buttoleadustosecurewhathidesbehindthepicture。 Whatarethereasonsforit?Inthefollowingsentences,I’llventuretoexplorethereasons.Tostartwith,theonly-onec
3、hildpolicyinChinahasmademoreandmoreparentspaymuchattentiontotheirchildrenthattheywouldliketoreplacetheirchildrentodoeverything.Inaddition,parentsdon’tbelievethattheirchildrenhaveenoughabilitytodealwiththeirpersonalmattersandmakeanydecisions.Therearesom
4、esuggestionsgiventoourparents。 Foronething,itisquiteimportantforourparentstorealizethattheirchildrenwillgrowupandhavetheirownideasastimegoesby.Foranother,childrenshouldbeencouragedtomakesomedecisionsalonesothattheyareabletopursuewhattheyreallywant.Ico
5、ntendthatourparentsshouldgivetheirchildrenafreehandinsomematterstohelpthemtobeindependent。Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandcommentonparents’roleintheirchildren’sgrowt
6、h.Youshouldwriteatleast120butnomorethan180words。 提示：这篇文章的主题可以写成“技术是否能代替学校”。思路：第一段描图；第二段正反议论型(现象解释型)；第三段个人观点。 Technologyhasdramaticallychangedourworld,stretchingitslegstoallwalksoflife.Asishumorouslydepictedinthedrawing,aboyholdingacellphoneinhishandi
7、saskinghismotherwithgreatsurprise.Sincehisphonecansolvealltheproblemsforhim,heargues,isitstillnecessarytogotoschool? Funnyasitseems,thispictureposesusacontroversialquestion:“cantechnologyreplacetraditionalschoollearning?”Forcenturies,ourChinesehaveadh
8、eredtothepublicwisdom:schoolwhereeducationisprovidedisindispensableinourdevelopment.Nevertheless,thereisagrowingrecognitionthattechnologyplaysanextremelyimportantroleinourstudy,whichwecanhardlyignored.Nowadays,whenchildrenhavequestions,
