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1、写作园地幻想故事写作［感悟范文］最近，某英文报社正在举行英文幻想故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头，续写一篇幻想小故事参赛。Ayoungmanwaswalkingthroughawoodwhenhesawashiningringlyingontheground・Hejuststoodandwonderedandthentheringsaid,"Youngman,akindgirlistrappedbyawitchinthecastleahead・Ifyouarebraveenoughtorescueher,youwillga
2、inhappiness.PutmeonandIwillhelpyou•”・・・注意:词数120左右。［范文］Ayoungmanwaswalkingthroughawoodwhenhesawashiningringlyingontheground・Hejuststoodandwonderedandthentheringsaid,uYoungman,akindgirlistrappedbyawitchinthecastleahead・Ifyouarebraveenoughtorescueher,youwillgainhappine
3、ss.PutmeonandIwillhelpyou."①Theyoungmandidn'thesitateandputtheringonhisfinger.②Muchtohissurprise,hediscoveredthathedisappearedandwasinvisibletoanyotherpeople・③Onlywhenhetookitoffcouldpeopleseehim.④Hefeltmoreconfidentandheadedforthecastle.⑤Onapproachingthecastle,hepu
4、ttheringonandenteredthecastle・⑥Heeventuallyfoundthecryinggirl,onwhomthewitchhadputaspell,learningthatthegirlcouldn'tmoveunlesssomeonedestroyedthewitch*smagicalclub,removingthespell・©Havinglearnedaboutthis,theyoungmanputtheringon,lookingaroundforthewitch*smagicalclub
5、・⑧Finally，hefounditinagoldenbox;hedestroyedit,removingthespellonthegirlandsavingthegirl.⑨Theyoungman,togetherwiththegirl,defeatedthewitch.⑩Thegirlsavedbytheyoungmanturnedouttobeaprincess,andthekingmarriedherofftotheyoungman，theyoungmanandtheprincesslivingahappylife.
6、［技法讨论］本模块要求写一篇幻想故事，幻想故事一般有环境、人物、情节以及文学的艺术性，在体裁上属于记叙文，情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。虚幻故事的写作步骤：1.仔细审题，确定文章结构虚幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始，第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果，最后一部分提出故事的教育意义。2.根据需要确定时态虚幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为主。3・筛选词汇虚幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张。为了吸引读者，故事的语言要生动，富于虚幻性。黄金表达Onceuponatime/Longlongag
7、o・・・stopdoingsth.evenif...keepdoingsth.enjoyoneselfTherewas..・Thatwaswhypeoplecalledit・・・Onseeing...Fromthisfablecomes…亮点分析：亮点一：③句中使用了部分倒装句式凸显了魔戒的魔力。亮点二：⑤句中使用了ondoingsth.这个结构，引出与下文紧接着发生的动作。亮点三：⑥句中使用了非限制性定语从句和现在分词短语，丰富了关于"thegiiT啲相关信息。亮点四：⑦句中使用了两处分词，使得句子更有层次性。亮点五:句中使
8、用了独立主格结构，使得句子结构更加复杂高级。亮点六：①句中hesitate,②句中muchtohissurprise,wasinvisibleto,④句中confident,headedfor,⑥句中eventually,⑩句中turnedouttobe等等这些词汇、短语的使
