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1、welcomeWritingByZhangHuiWhatmakesagoodessay?Ⅰ.Discussion感知典型范例感知典型范例——词汇层面1adj.聪明的、脑筋好的clever→wise→smart→bright→intelligent感知典型范例——词汇层面2adj.令人惊奇的surprising→amazing→astonishingexactlyusedandadvancedwords准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇(not…until)→He______comehere______yeste

2、rdayafternoon.2.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.3.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.感知典型范例——句型层面1advancedsentencepatterns使用高级句型nogrammaticalmistakes没有语法错误Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.他昨天下午来的。didn’tuntil感知典型范例——段落层面Ithink,foruschildren

3、,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentsthoughwearebusy.Oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemlivehappily.Wecanbuildaharmonioussocietyonlywhenallofuscarefortheaged.AsfarasIamconcerned,foruschildren,weshouldoftengohom

4、eandstaytogetherwithourparentshoweverbusyweare.What’smore,oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemliveahappylife.Onlywhenallofuscarefortheagedcanwebuildaharmonioussocietyproperlinkwords使用恰当的连接词varioussentencepatterns用较丰富的句式感知典型

5、范例——篇章层面1卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得8分感知典型范例——篇章层面2字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。poor——篇章层面3excellentneatandclean卷面整洁wellorganized结构合理thecontentiscomplet内容要完整Conclusion:Whatmakesagoodessay?1.neatandclean卷面整洁2.completecontent内容完整3.wellorganized结构合理4.exactlyusedandadvan

6、cedwords准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇5.properlinkingwords使用恰当的连接词6.varioussentencepatterns用较丰富的句式假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30Ⅱ.Pre-writing(2013全国卷)注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和介绍语已为你写好。Dea

7、rPeter,Howareyoudoing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaⅡ.Pre-writing(teamwork)Task1:DecidethepersonandtenseTask2:Decidethestruc

8、tureTask3:WritedownthekeywordsandsentencepatternsTask1:person(人称)tense（时态）ThefirstpersonThepresentandthefuturetensePerson:Tense:DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?_____________________________________________________________________