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1、CET作文评分实例分析林明金Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononPracticeMakesPerfect^1997年1月).Youshouldwriteatleast100WordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheOutline(giveninChinese)below:1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”?2.例如:在英语学习中……3.又如……14pointsPracticeMakesPerfectItisafamoussayingthatpracticem
2、akesperfect.Thetruthofitisself-evident・Themoreyoupractice,themoreskillfulyouwillbe.Moreover,youwillfindbetterwaysofdoingthings.Aseveryonecansee,practicehelpsustobeefficient.WhenwestudyEnglish,wehavesomuchtolearn,suchasgrammar,vocabulary.InordertolearnitwelLweneedmuchpractice・Wemustreadalot,writeal
3、otandlistentoalot.Onlythroughpracticecanwehaveagoodcommandofit.DoremembertopracticeifyouwanttospeakEnglishfluentlyandexpressyourselffreely.Anothercaseinpointistyping.Agoodtypistcantypefastandaccurately.Butyouwillnotbesurprisedatherperformanceifyouknowhowmuchtimeshehasspentpracticing.Throughpractic
4、e,shehasbothhertypingspeedandaccuracytobeimproved・Itgoeswithoutsayingthatpracticemakesperfect・Sinceallofushaverealizedtheimportanceofpractice,whynotputitintopractice?本文最大的特点是文笔流畅,例子得当。作者在文屮用了大量的连接词,女□:moreover,as,when,inorderto,if,but,since等;第二段还了一个only开头的倒装句,收到了很好的效果;文章的最后一句与标题相呼应,意味深长。14pointsPr
5、acticeMakesPerfectThereisapopularsayingupracticemakesperfectn.Thisproverbtellsusthatconsistentpracticecanresultinperfectperformance.Practiceisofvitalimportanceindoingeverything・LetmetakeasanexamplemypersonalexperienceinlearningEnglish.WhenIcametotheuniversitytwoyearsago,Ihadgreattroublewithlisteni
6、ngcomprehension.Ihaddifficultyinunderstandingwhattheteachersaid,letalonefollowingthetapes.ThiswasobviouslyduetothelackofpracticewhenIwasatmiddleschool.Withthedeterminationtoimprovemylisteningability,IstartedtoreadEnglishaloudeverymorningandlistentotapesandradioprogrammeseveryevening.Myeffortspaido
7、fandinthefinalexaminationofthefirsttermIgothighmarksinlistening・Thisproverbisalsoapplicableinotherfields.Itisimpossibleforanathletetobreaktheworldrecordwithouthundredsandthousandsoftimesofexercise.Adancer'sgracef