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1、无老师优秀范例：Amorerealisticandrationalcriteriontovalueteachers'work(andthereforedecidetheirsalary)shouldincludefactorssuchascomprehensivedevelopmentsofstudents,teachers'owncapacitytocultivateandeducate,andparents'feedback・Yetmydisagreementdoesnotsuggestthatstudents'performanceshouldbeabando

2、nedbutratherincludedalongwithotherindispensablefactorsinevaluatingteachers，work,sinceschoolreportisstillamongmostparents^topconcernsandstudentshavetouseitasanchorwhenapplyingforfurtherstudies.Also,itisreasonablethatteacherswhocanenhancestudents5performanceshouldbepaidbetter,asthemeasur

3、ewouldmoderatelymotivateteacherstoworkhard.:一个衡虽教师工作，同时也可以决定教师工资的更为现实的，同时也是更为理性的标准应该包括如下这些因素，比如对于学生的全面发展，教师自己的提升及教学能力，以及对于家长的反馈。但是，我的意见并不是说学生的表现可以不被列入考察范围，我认为当判断学生的表现的时候，应当结合评价教师工作的很多其它必不可少的因素一起讨论，因为学生们最终的成绩述是大多数家长最关心的，同时当学生们巾请学校的时候要把这些成绩作为一个衡量自己的标准。而且，那些能够捉高学牛成绩的教师得到更好的报酬也是很合理的，因为只有这样

4、的方法才会激励教师更努力的工作。无老师'卜庸范例：Whenwewanttojudgeateacher^work,amorerealisticandrationalstandardshouldincludethefollowingparts,suchas,thestudents'wholedevelopment,theabilityofimprovingthemselvesandenhancingtheireducating,andtheparents'responses・But,Idonotdisagreewiththatweshouldnotconsiderthe

5、students5performance・Whenwewanttojudgethestudents9performance,Ibelievethatweshouldcombinealotofotherindispensablepartsofjudgingteachers,work.Becausewhatmostparentscareaboutisthefinalscores,andthefinalscoresalsoareimportantstandardtodeterminethestudents.Butalso,theteacherswhocouldpromot

6、ethestudents'scoreshouldgetwellpaid,whichcouldencouragetheteacherstoworkhard・无老帅精析:遣词造句的差别才是真正决定一个人分数的高低，而不是单纯的思、路或者结构。思路或者结构真的只是皮毛Z功，今天的优秀范例•平庸范例就是一个很好的体现。这里优秀范例是典型的满分作文，而平庸范例虽然意思上所查无儿，但是最多也就是18分的水平,这就是遣词造句的实力的差别。首先第一句：优秀扌也彳列Amorerealisticandrationalcriteriontovalueteachers9work(andth

7、ereforedecidetheirsalary)shouldincludefactorssuchascomprehensivedevelopmentsofstudents,teachers5owncapacitytocultivateandeducate,andparents'feedback•对比、卜庸范例Whenwewanttojudgeateacher^work,amorerealisticandrationalstandardshouldincludethefollowingparts,suchas,thestudents'wholedevelopme