英语作文作者亲身经历类

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1、记叙文写作一,包括两类：1.记叙他人的或其他的故事;2.讲述作者自己亲身经历二，如何概括?概括时候要抓住记叙文的以下要素：事件(what)人物(who)时间(time)地点(where)情节(how)结果(result/whattolearn)Onemorning(时间),MrHare(人物)wasrunningontheroad(地点).SuddenlyhesawMrTortoise(人物),whowasalsorunningontheroadtowardshim.MrHareranuptoMrTortoiseandla

2、ughedathim.MrTortoisegotangryandsuggestedhavingarace(事件)toseewhocouldfirstgettothebigtalltreebytheroadsides.MrHareagreedwithhimwithouthesitation.Theracebegan.MrHareandMrtortoisestartedfromthesamelineatthesametime.WhenMrHarewasfaraheadofMrTortoiseandevencouldn'tsee

3、MrTortoise,hethoughtthatMrTortoisefellbehindandcouldn'tcatchupwithhim.Sohestoppedandlaydowntohaveanap(情节).Butsoonhefellasleep.Atthesametime,MrTortoisekeptonrunningandrunning(情节).WhenMrHarewokeup,hefoundMrTortoisehadalreadysatunderthetree(结果)andwassmilingathim!三，概括

4、模式1.记叙他人的故事的或其他一件事情;2.讲述作者自己亲身经历1)Thepassageshowsusthat/astorythat…(事件).…..（情节）…….（结果）2)Thepassage/Thestoryisabout…..(事件).…..（情节）…….（结果）3)Theauthortellsusastory……..4)Inthepassage,theauthortellsusthat…..5)Thepassage/storytellsusaboutthewriter’sexperience……..四，注意事项：

5、1.选择重要的要素为中心，相对不重要的可以省略。2.阐述一个故事梗概，忌力陈细节，忌掺入个人评价或观点（但是材料中作者给出了评价或观点时，此观点一定要包在概括中）。3.忌直接摘抄文中原句，要用自己的话重新组织句子。Onemorning(时间),MrHare(人物)wasrunningontheroad(地点).SuddenlyhesawMrTortoise(人物),whowasalsorunningontheroadtowardshim.MrHareranuptoMrTortoiseandlaughedathim.MrTo

6、rtoisegotangryandsuggestedhavingarace(事件)toseewhocouldfirstgettothebigtalltreebytheroadsides.MrHareagreedwithhimwithouthesitation.Theracebegan.MrHareandMrtortoisestartedfromthesamelineatthesametime.WhenMrHarewasfaraheadofMrTortoiseandevencouldn'tseeMrTortoise,heth

7、oughtthatMrTortoisefellbehindandcouldn'tcatchupwithhim.Sohestoppedandlaydowntohaveanap(情节).Butsoonhefellasleep.Atthesametime,MrTortoisekeptonrunningandrunning(情节).WhenMrHarewokeup,hefoundMrTortoisehadalreadysatunderthethreeandwassmilingathim!(结果)事件(what)aracebetwe

8、enMrHareandMrTortoise人物(who)MrHareandMrTortoise时间(time)onemorning地点(where)ontheroad情节(how)MrHarewasproudandlaydowntohaveanap.MrTortoisekeptrunning结果(res