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1、ReviewerRecommendationandCommentsforManuscriptNumberPROCIRD1600283ComparabilityofSystemsStructuresinModelBasedSystemsEngineeringforMechatronicSystemsOriginalSubmissionMartinTörngren(Reviewer2)BackEditReviewPrintSubmitReviewToJournalOfficeRecommendation:MajorRevisionOverallMa

2、nuscriptRating(1100):30ReviewerBlindCommentstoAuthor:Overallthepapertreatsarelevanttopic.Highlevelcommentstothepaperareasfollows:Theauthorsneedtoclarifythecontributionofthepaper,andbetterexplainhowanycontributionreferstostateoftheart.Currentlythisisunclear.Limitedstateofthea

3、rtcoverage:Thereexistsabodyofresearchonmechatronicandmechanicalsystemsincludingtaxonomies.Iamnotconfidentthatrelevantstateoftheartiscoveredbythepaper,forexampleintermsoftheclassificationofconnections.Theauthorscouldimproveonthisbeclearlydescribinghowtheysurveyedstateoftheart

4、andbyclarifyingtheircontributions.Thepapercontainsanumberofclaims,theseneedsubstantiation(seefurtherfeedback).Howhastheproposedclassificationandguidelinesbeenevaluated?Furtherfeedback:Thepapermakesuseofanumberofkeyconceptswithoutexplainingthem.Sincetheyarecentraltothepaper,p

5、rovidingnoexplanationmakesthepaperhardtounderstandforthereader.Keytermsshouldbeclearlyexplained(andreferencedwhenrelevant).Suchkeyconceptsinclude"Systemmodel","Systemtheory","Mainconnections","Mainfunction",...AspecialtermisthatofMBSEforwhichtherearemanyinterpretations,typic

6、allyemphasizingmultipleviews/models(seeISO42010)andalsowithemphasisonsimulation,andintegrationofmodels.ItisthehumbleopinionofthereviewerthatthedescriptionofMBSEneedselaborationandnuancing.Notsubstantiatedclaims(lackingelaborationandreferences):"...ananalysisofalreadymodeleds

7、ystemstructuresshowssubstantialdifferencesinthewayofmodeling.""Thegraphicalmodelspresenttheinformationuniformly,...andareeasytomaintain""Weoftenfindtypicalerrorssuchasinconsistentorincompleteinterfacespecifications."Missingreferences:"Thesethreekindsaredefinedinthesystemtheo

8、ry."Whichtheoryisthis?Lateron"Designtheory"isreferredto.Alsothisconceptispr