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1、四级作文范文赏析及点评2011.12Directions:You'reallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I'vedoneithundredsoftime."You'dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.Thereisanoldsaying:
2、wherethereisawill,thereisaway.Ittellsusthatastrongwillisthemostessentialqualitythatanyonewhowantstoachievesuccess.Itcancontributealottoone’ssuccess.Although“AllroadsleadtoRome”,noneofthemiscompletelysmooth.Ourlifeisfilledwithobstacleswhichmaymakeusfeelsohopelessthatwemaychooset
3、ogiveup.Atthecrucialmoment,strongwillhelpsalot.Asamatteroffact,theabilitytoworkthroughdifficultsituationandunfortunateeventswithstrongwillcanmakeonestrongerandmorecapable.Inotherwords,ifwewanttorealizelife’sgoal,wemustkeepforgingaheadwithstrongconsciousness.Fromwhathasbeendiscu
4、ssedabove,wecanseethattheestablishmentoftoughdeterminationisofgreatimportancetoeveryone.Withastrongwill,includingourknowledge,wewillbeabletodealwithanysituationinourlife.Whateverwedo,aslongaswesticktoanddonotgiveupeasily,wewillrealizethegoalatlast.2011.6Directions:Forthispart,y
5、ouareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3.我的建议Nowadays,canwefindapersonwhohasnotexperiencedonlineshopping?Definitelynot.Onlineshoppingiscomingintofashioninmost
6、ofcitiesduetotherapiddevelopmentofinternettechnology.Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetovariousreasons.Fromtheperspectiveofconsumer,itcansavesometimeforpeoplewhodon’thavemuchsparetime.Justclickthemouse,theycangetwhatevertheywantwhilestayingathome.Fortheretailers,itcancuts
7、omecostsforthosewhodon’thavemuchcirculatingfunds.Theydon’thavetorentahouseandspendmoneyonemployeescomparedwiththetraditionaltrademode.However,therearestillsomedefectsinonlineshopping.First,facetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.Second,peoplewilllosethefunof
8、bargain.Itisundeniablethatshoppingontheinternethasbeco
