八级写作辅导.ppt

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1、TEM8写作部分应试技巧与指导4.开场白妙招：4.1.“引---限---提”——引题，限题，点题TheBestWaytoStayHealthy1)Itisestimatedthat70percentofthemid-agedpeopleinsuchbigcitiesasBeijingandShanghaiareinasub-healthcondition.2)Therefore,healthhasbecomeanimportantissueforthewholesociety.3)Astohowtostayhealthy,“somanypeople,soman

2、yminds.”4)Somepeoplefavorphysicalexercise,whileotherspreferabalanceddiet.5)Inmyopinion,doingphysicalexerciseisthebestwaytostayhealthy.范文评析：从调查数据1），引出2）health；针对health我们有诸多话题，如，重要性，成本等等，但是3）和4）把讨论的议题限制在“howtostayhealthy”。最后通过5）提出自己的观点。TEM8写作部分应试技巧与指导4.开场白妙招：4.1.“引---限---提”——引题，限题，点题T

3、heBetterWaytoGetInformation:TheInternet1)Itissaidthatthe21stcenturyis“thecenturyofinformation”.2)Andthewaysforpeopletogetinformationarevaried.3)Amongthenumeroussources,theInternetandprintedbooksaretwomainkinds.4)However,withthetechnologicaldevelopment,Internethasbecomeobviouslysuper

4、iortoprintedbooks.范文评析：句1）引出大背景informationage,句2）限题在“thewaysofgettinginformation”,句3）更进一步限题在theInternet和printedbooks两种方法上，句4）提出自己的选择。TEM8写作部分应试技巧与指导4.开场白妙招：4.2.引言（数据，格言，谚语）+观点Honesty:IsItGoingOutofStyle?1)Accordingtoarecentpoll,61percentofAmericanhighschoolstudentshaveadmittedcheati

5、ngonexamsatleastonce.2)Itcanbearguedthatsucharesponsemaynotmeanmuch.3)Afterall,moststudentshavebeenfacedwiththetemptationtopeekataneighbor’stestpaper.4)Andstudentscanbehardonthemselvesinjudgingsuchbehaviors.5)However,thereareotherindicationsthathighschoolcheatingmaybeontherise…TEM8写

6、作部分应试技巧与指导4.开场白妙招：4.2.引言（数据，格言，谚语）+观点TravelCanBroadenOurViewsAsaChineseoldsayinggoes,travelingtenthousandmilesandreadingtenthousandbooksisthetopidealforpeople.Traveldoesbroadenourmind.Itenablesustoappreciatebeautifulscenery,valuethecultureandcustomsofapeopleandlearnthehistory.TEM8写作

7、部分应试技巧与指导4.开场白妙招：4.3.贴切简单的例子+观点TheProfitsofPraiseItwastheendofmyexhaustingfirstdayaswaitressinabusyrestaurant.TheloadedtraysIcarriedfeltheavierandheavier.Wearyanddiscouraged,Ididn’tseemabletodoanythingright.AsImadeoutacomplicatedcheckforafamilywithseveralchildrenwhohadchangedtheiric

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