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1、.英语作文激励性评语一、宏观性评价1.整体印象类评语Super!  Excellent!  Perfect!Wonderful.  Fantastic.  Marvelous.采用整体印象类评语对于高中起始阶段的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一律德使用此类评语，就会使学生无法正确认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师的评语失去应有的作用。2.规范导知类评语Beautiful.  Clear.   Wonderful.  Goodhand-writing.You’recarefulofusingpronunciation.Gladtoseeyourimprovemen

2、tinhandwriting.I'mexpectingclearer/morebeautifulhand-writingfromyounexttime.You’dbetterpaymoreattentiontowordorder.Betterbemorecarefulofyourspelling.It'simportanttocomposeadraftbeforehand.3.情感调控类评语Iappreciateyourhandwriting.YouhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishproverbs.Youarequiteawareofma

3、kingmeaningfulsentences...Youarericherthanothersincollectingandusingtypicalsentencesanidiom.I'mexpectinggreaterprogressfromyouinwriting.Comeon.Ifyouneedmyhelp,neverhesitatetocometome.警句：Hardworkleadstosuccess.Nottoadvanceistogoback.Nooneiswithoutfaults.Keepingisharderthanwinning.Kee

4、pitup.二、微观写作技能方面的评语1.专项点拨类评语It'spropertousetheproverbinPara.2Quiteclever.Youaregoodatusingattributiveclausesinyourwriting.The"struck"sentenceisperfectlyused.You'dbetteruse"thirdperson"inthefirstPara.It'sgoodtousethepasttenseinyourwriting.2.佳句欣赏类评语教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号（如E--Excellent)或标识不

5、同星级等。Whatawonderfulsentenceusing"cover".It'sreallycleverofyoutousethisbeautifulsentence...Theinvertedsentenceiswellwritten.3.谋篇布局类评语Agoodbeginning. Aperfectending. Well-organized.  Perfectly-expanded.Thefirstpara.makesagoodbeginning.Thelastpara.makesaperfectending.Allthepointshavebe

6、encovered.It'scleverofyoutouseatopicsentenceatthebeginningofapara.It'swonderfultouseproperconjunctionsbetweensentences.YouaregoodatdevelopingaPara.Youhavemadegreatprogressindevelopingapassage.IamgladtoseethesentencecoherenceinyourlastPara.Betterpaymoreattentiontotherelationshipbetwe

7、ensentences.It'sreallywonderfultostart/endyoursentenceswithadverbials. Whatisyourname? Iamverygladtoseethatyourideas.Ithinkitisagoodessay.YouaregoodatdevelopingaPara.Thestructureisveryclearandyouorganizeyourpointsinalogicallyway.Ifthereismoredetailed..information,itwillbebetter.andp

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