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1、哈佛大学个人陈述PS三篇优秀范文示例撰写留学文书最难的部分是personalstatement(PS),我们可以通过以下三篇优秀的哈佛大学优秀essay来了解下,如何撰写高质量的文章。第一篇申请美国哈佛大学的Essay范文,以音乐才能为主题,采用的是场景描述式来制造戏剧冲突,引起读者注意。Essay题材类型为talent。Essay短文讲述了作者的才能:Music。"AspecialPerformance"Istoodbehindthecurtainslisteningtotheapplausetothepreviousa
2、ct.Iexhaled,realizingthatthiswasamomentthatfulfilledmychildhoodwish.Tonightwasspecialbecauseinsteadofanaltoariaorajazzlick,Ihadpreparedasonguniquetomyidentity.Icurledmyfingersaroundthemicrophoneandwaitedimpatientlyasthecurtainsopened.Myloveforperformancestemmedfro
3、mmyappreciationofmusicasachild.InthecityinChinawhereIspentthefirsttenyearsofmylife,Ineverfoundachoirtojoinandneverlaideyesonagrandpiano.Nonetheless,Itreasuredmypassionforsongandsoughtwaystobringmusicintomylife.IsangwithouroldrecordplayerwhenIwasbarelytallenoughtor
4、eachit.Oncertainafternoons,mybestfriendandIwouldtapebedsheetstotheceilingascurtainsandinviteneighborstocomelisten.There,wesanginduet,danced,andbowedwhileclaspingeachother'shands.Capturedinourownmusicalsanctuary,wenevernoticedthehoursthatpassedby.Musicevokesinmethe
5、emotionsthatwordsandpicturescannot.Ialsorevelintheintellectualchallengesthatmusicoffers.Ifinditthrillingtotackledifficult,deliciousrepertoire,andIenjoycomposingmyownmelodies.Throughmusic,Icanshareandcelebratemypast.WhenIwasaskedtosharemyculturaltalentsatmyhighscho
6、ol,IlookedforasongthatmymothersangwhenIwasyoung,butIcouldnotfindthesheetmusic.Aweekbeforetonight,Isatdownbytheoldpianointhepracticeroomatschool.Withonlytheoldtuneringingfaintlyinmymind,myhandssoontookalifeoftheirownandexperimentedwithchords,arpeggios,andtrills.Isu
7、perimposedtheseontheoriginalmelodyandcomposedvariations.Myvoice,too,frolickedwiththepianoasIsangthetunerepeatedly.Iwaslostinanothermusicalparadise.Ifeltlikeachildagain,tuckedunderthecovers,listeningtomymother'ssongasIdriftedawaytodreams.Now,dressedinanoldChinesedr
8、essthatmymotherhadworninheryouth,Isteppedontotheemptystageilluminatedbypalebluelight.Iheldthemicrophoneuptomylipsandsmiledbeforestarting.Then,Ibroughtto