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1、一．Disagreements１．Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．)Once one has money,he can do what he wants (to do).二．MisplacedModifiers(修饰语错位）１．IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.I believe I can do it well and I will  know the w

2、orld outside the campuswell.三．SentenceFragments(句子不完整）Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper.四．DanglingModifiers(悬垂修饰语）指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．1.Attheageoften,mygra

3、ndfatherdied.When I was ten, my grandfather died.2.Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.：To do well in college, a student needs good grades.五．MisuseofPartsofSpeech(词性误用)１．Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney.六．AmbiguousReferenceofPr

4、onouns(指代不清)代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。1.Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。)Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecausehewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.七．Run-onSentences(不间断句子)1.TherearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworldTherea

5、remanywaysforustolearnabouttheoutsideworld.Therearemanywaysthroughwhichwecanbecomeacquaintedwiththeoutsideworld八．TroublesinDiction(措词毛病)１．Theincreasinguseofchemicalobstaclesinagriculturealsomakespollution.(农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。)Theabusiveuseofchemicalsubstancesinagr

6、iculturealsocauses/leadstopollution.九．Redundancy(累赘)1.Inspiteofthefactthatheislazy,Ilikehim.Inspiteofhislaziness,Ilikehim2．Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,moneyisjustthethingtobeusedtobuythethingtheyneed.Diligent,caringpeopleusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.十．(Incoher

7、ence不连贯)１．Thefreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.