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1、美国留学，部分大学会要求学生写Essay,尤其是名校，几乎是都会有所要求。其实这也是一个有力的展现自己的途径。所以如果要申请名词靠前的学校，还是多多练习一下Essay文章的写作。 Sameer在美国的底特律长大，高中时他的随着家人移居加拿大。Sameer有色盲和音盲这两个问题，他在他的申请短文时解释为什么对于他来说，他在烹饪的创造表现能力是有限的。他在文中很清楚地表达了他在追求烹饪达到完美而获得的快乐，而且在人生中他也会有同样的态度。 很多人问过，有没有申请短文的模板。如果你想得到一篇好的文章，就一定要学生写出自己的
2、AdmissionEssay。写好后，可以由高手一起共同研究，琢磨如何修改。但一定不要全部让他人代劳。看看这位同学是如何写的吧。 申请哈佛大学成功的Essay范文 Myaimiscreation.Ilovetheideaofgivinglifetonothingness.WereIanotherpersoninanothertime,Imightspendmywholelifetillingtheland.Justliketheearliestfarmers,thesightofdirtgivingrisetocar
3、rotsandtomatoesatmywhimfeelslikeamiracle.Iliketorandomlyburstoutinsong.Iliketoshakemybody.IfIcouldIwouldbeapianistandapoetandapainterandapolitician.Unfortunately,inallthesedisciplinesmyabilitycan'tmeetmyenthusiasm.WhereIcancreate,andbreaktiredcodes,isinthekitchen
4、.WithunlimitedtimeandresourcesIwouldbecomethebestpastrybakerandthefinestchefinalloftheeasternseaboard. Ireallylikefood.OnsomedrabschooldaysIcheermyselfupthinkingofthedinnerawaitingmeintheevening.OftenIdoa24-hourfasttoreadymystomachforahugemeal.Now,beingservedthi
5、sfoodisfine.It'susuallyrestfulandrewardingtositdownafteralongdaytosomeoneelse'scarefulwork,whethertheybeparents,grandmothers,orLittleCaesar.ButI'venoticedadullglazeintheeyesofthosewhocookeverynight.They'redoingitnottoforgetheuncreatedconscienceoftheirrace,asahung
6、ryJamesJoycemightsay,butoutofsometimesloveandsometimesduty.Iknowcookswhose"oldstandbys"wowmeeverytime,buttheyhaven'tanypleasureintheirlabors.CareanddutyareNOTwhyIwanttoexplorefood. Ilovethewholeculinaryprocess,fromseedlingtogrocerytorefrigeratortooventotable.Ate
7、achstagetheelementsgrowmorecomplexandmyworkfarmoredeliberate.Peelingandcoringanappletakesmoreintellectionthanplantingarowofseeds.YetIthinkIshinewhereorderfadesaway:beyondrulesandrecipes,inthatzonecalledIt'sUpToYou.Idecidedtothrowinacupofyogurtinsteadofbuttertomyp
8、oundcake.Noonetoldmethatlentils,carrots,andabayleafwouldmakeagreatsalad.Ijustfeltthemtogether.Andtherewasaunanimousvote--me--toaddcuminandcoriandertothespaghet
