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1、中考英语作文满分五要素满分作文五要素是哪五要素?1.要点2.结构3.逻辑4.语法5.亮点1.要点要点要全面,懂得详略得当Mary在学校参加了一个BuddyClub,从那以后,她改变了很多。请结合下面所给的提示,写一篇英语短文。InthepastNowPersonalitiesshy,quiet,getnervouseasilybrave,outgoing...Hobbiesreadingreading,singing...Abilitiesgoodatdancing,singing2.结构结构清晰,一般为“总--分--总”结构以议论文为例:第一段:开门见山,表明观点;第二段:论证,举例
2、说明;第三段:提出希望或建议。3.逻辑(过度词)表顺序关系:firstofall,secondly,then,finally,intheend,atlast;表并列补充关系:whatismore,besides,furthermore,inaddition;表转折对比关系:however,onthecontrary,but;Although+clause;表因果关系:because,as,so,thus,therefore,asaresult换一种关系表达:inotherwords;举例说明:Forexample,forinstance,suchas;表达自己的观点:asfarasIk
3、now,inmyopinion;表总结:inshort,inaword,inclusion,insummary.4.语法避免出现语法错误,如时态误用、单词拼写错误、主谓不一致等。例子:1.Welivemoreandmorecomfortable.(comfortably)2.Wecangetmanyinformationbyreadingnewspapers(much)3.ThereismanyprogramsonTV.(are)5.亮点注意词汇、短语、句型的多样性,如表示漂亮的词有:beautiful,good-looking,attractive,charming,catching
4、...满分作文范文为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。要点:1.慎重交友;2.预先报警;3.安全饮食;4.其他(1-2点)注意:1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥;2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;3.词数80左右文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:becareful,online,danger,call...for,gobadHowtoKeepSafe?Asteenagersweshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe
5、?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Also,weoughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Eatingfoodthatgoesbadwilldoharmtoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,summeriscoming,andwemustremembe
6、rit'sdangeroustoswimintheriver.Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!Thankyou.