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2、powerisoff,welightit.3.It’saroundobject,usuallymadeofredpaper,welightitonJanuarythefifteenthofthelunarmonth.It’sasymbolofreunion.ColorShapeSizeMaterialFunction1.这款手机长5英寸，宽3英寸。2.这是个长方形的有着黑色金属外壳的手机。3.它可被用来打电话而且可以上网。4.这款手机售价2000元。5.本手机质量上乘，价格低廉。6.这类手机深受青少年的喜爱。Thisphonemeasures5inchesinlengthand3inc

3、hesinwidth.Thisphoneissoldatthepriceof2000yuan.Phonesofthiskindareparticularlypopularwithteenagers.Thisphoneisofsuperiorquality，butcheap.Thisisarectangularphonewithablackmetalshell.ItcanbeusedtomakephonecallsandsurftheInternet.MarkingandPolishingThisphoneis5incheslongand3incheswide.It’srectangul

4、ar.Ithasablackmetalshell.Itcanbeusedtomakephonecallsandalsosurftheinternet.Thepriceofitis¥2000.It’sgoodbutcheap.Thiskindofphoneisdeeplylovedbyyoungpeople.ScoringStandards21-25points516-20points411-15points36-10points21-5points1第五档（很好）（21-25分）1完全完成了试题规定的任务。2覆盖所有内容要点。3应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4语法或词汇方面有些许错误，但

5、为尽力使用较复杂结构或词汇所致。具备较强的语言运用能力。5有效地使用了语句间的成份，使全文结构紧凑。6完全达到预期的写作目的。Standards第四档（好）（16-20分）1完全完成了试题规定的任务。2虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3运用的语法结构或词汇方面能满足任务的要求。4语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6达到了预期的写作目的。MarkingandPolishingThisphoneis5incheslongand3incheswide.It’srectangular.Ithasa

6、blackmetalshell.Itcanbeusedtomakephonecallsandalsosurftheinternet.Thepriceofitis¥2000.It’sgoodbutcheap.Thiskindofphoneisdeeplylovedbyyoungpeople.Polishing:TomakesomethingshineProblemSolving:PleasereadthefollowingletterandtrytosolvetheproblemforLiHua.DearMs.Sun,Ineedyourhelp.Iwanttobuyacamera,but

7、mygirlfrienddoesn’tagree.Canyoutrytodescribethecameraasbeautifullyaspossible,sothatmygirlfriendwillbeconvinced?It’sproducedbyFujifactory.Ithasmanymodelsandcolors.It’slightandsmall.It’seasytooperate.Ithasmanyfunctions.Andit’s