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1、阅卷老师的评分标准切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖用词不重复句式变化多杜绝中国式的英文文章当中的闪光点卷面的整洁，正确的修改形式阅卷老师的评分标准一、切题，把段落当中每一个标题都要覆盖。Whatwouldhappeniftherewerenopower?ItpaystobehonestAletterinreplytoafriendSchedulefortheday二、句式变化多(Expressions)句子的多样性（简单句，复合句，及省略句、倒装句)例:在简单句当中运用几种结构:主语+谓语+宾语主语+谓语+双宾语（直接宾语，间接宾语
2、）主语+谓语+宾补注意运用Therebe的句型Onecarcome,onecargo,twocarbangbang,onecardie.尽量多用一些被动语态，多用名词做主语，用被动代替主动,丰富文章当中的句式变化。例：Heisveryinterestedinpopmusic.Heshowsgreatinterestsinpopmusic.Popmusiciswhatheisinterestedin.Greatinterestshasbeenshownbyhiminpopmusic.六大从句的运用:宾语从句定语从句状语从句主语从句表语从
3、句同位语从句AsfarasIamconcernedIagreewiththepointthat-------Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-------------AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopinionthat------------三、用词不重复必须要注意写作的具体元素及，用词切记多余重复(redundancy)一个词下一次提到表示相同的意思应该用不同的词来表达。尽量用词组和从句代替一个词的用法:forexample/forinstance/asanillustration./Acase
4、inpointisthatgood/wonderful/great/fantastic/surprisingnice/incredible/fabulous/incredibleinterviewee/jobapplicant/jobhunter/jobseeker/thepeoplewhoaregoingtofindajob.用句子和词组来代替一个词inthefirstplace,inthesecondplaceTherearemanypeoplewhohold/argue/maintainthat----Itgoeswithout
5、sayingthat-------------AsfarasIknowIaminfavoroftheopinionthat------------四、文章当中的闪光点在四级考试作文题目当中适当地运用谚语可以起到画龙点睛的作用，增加文章当中的闪光点。但是谚语引用在文章中最多不能超过三次，引用的谚语也不能太偏。Eachcoinhastwosides.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.Wherethereisawillthereisaway.“Godhelpsthosethathelpthemselves”Alittlele
6、arningisaverydangerousthing.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.五、杜绝中国式的英文Asaproverbsays:“AmericaandChinanotenough.”Isawabreadcarkissawalkmanintheman-line.Leftseesee,rightseesee.Thedriverishorsehorsetigertiger.Onestop,twosee,threeacross.Iwilldoanhonestman.Nomoney,notalk.
7、Dr.Kong’shusbandMiaoYounoseeme,younogo.Inoseeyou,Inogo.Noseenogo.WritingModelsNowadays/atpresent,withthedevelopmentofhumancivilization,aswellasthesignificantimprovementofthescienceoftechnology,andduetotherapidchangesinoursociallives,moreandmorepeopleareconcerningaboutwh
8、ether文章主题，Asaresult,thetopicof把主题改写为被动，isincreasinglybecomingthemostpopularcontroversyrecently,whichraisesmany
