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1、21/2121/2121/2121/2121/2121/2121/2121/2121/212011年6月英语四级考试真题答案PartIWriting规范版DoingShoppingOnlineWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet，shoppingisnolongeratiringthing.Justclickyourmousetochoosethearticlesyoulike，andthepurchaseisdone.Youdon’tevenhavetostepoutoftheroom.Itseemsalleasyandquick.However

2、，people’sopinionsvaryonthistrend.Somebelievethatonlineshoppingistimeandmoneysaving.Withplentifulselectionoptions，theycanbuywhatevertheylikeatanytimeconvenient.Stillothersinsistthatmis-purchasingaloneisannoyingenough，nottomentionthecredibilityofthesellersandthesafetyoftheiraccounts.Inmyopin

3、ion，theconvenienceandexcitementofonlineshoppingisbeyondalldoubts.Inthemeantime，wemustalwaysbearinmindthatcertaintrapsdoexist，sowe’dbettermakesurethesellersaretrustworthybeforebuying.Inaddition，weshouldalsoguardourselvesfromthepotentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation.文章点评：这是一篇“中等偏

4、上”的学生作文。本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇；接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比；最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，用语较为地道。下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处：1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。但是，以“WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。2.微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如Withplentifulselectionoptions…简化成Withplentifulsele

5、ctions…更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多；高分版Nowadays，canwefindapersonwhohasnotexperiencedonlineshopping？Definitelynot.Onlineshoppingiscomingintofashioninmostofcitiesduetotherapiddevelopmentofinternettechnology.21/21Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetovariousreasons.Fromtheperspectiveofconsumer，it

6、cansavesometimeforpeoplewhodon’thavemuchsparetime.Justclickthemouse，theycangetwhatevertheywantwhilestayingathome.Fortheretailers，itcancutsomecostsforthosewhodon’thavemuchcirculatingfunds.Theydon’thavetorentahouseandspendmoneyonemployeescomparedwiththetraditionaltrademode.However，therearest

7、illsomedefectsinonlineshopping.First，facetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.Second，peoplewilllosethefunofbargain.Itisundeniablethatshoppingontheinternethasbecomeanirresistibletrendinmodernsociety.It’sofgreaturgencythatweneedtoregulatethere