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1、2011年6月英语四级真题与答案详解PartIWriting　　规范版　　DoingShoppingOnline　　WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingisnolongeratiringthing.Justclickyourmousetochoosethearticlesyoulike,andthepurchaseisdone.Youdon’tevenhavetostepoutoftheroom.Itseemsalleasyandquick.　　However,people’sopinionsvaryonthistrend.So

2、mebelievethatonlineshoppingistimeandmoneysaving.Withplentifulselectionoptions,theycanbuywhatevertheylikeatanytimeconvenient.Stillothersinsistthatmis-purchasingaloneisannoyingenough,nottomentionthecredibilityofthesellersandthesafetyoftheiraccounts.　　Inmyopinion,theconvenienceandexcitemento

3、fonlineshoppingisbeyondalldoubts.Inthemeantime,wemustalwaysbearinmindthatcertaintrapsdoexist,sowe’dbettermakesurethesellersaretrustworthybeforebuying.Inaddition,weshouldalsoguardourselvesfromthepotentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation.　　文章点评：　　这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇；接

4、着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比；最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，用语较为地道。　　下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处：　　1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。但是，以“WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。　　2.微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如Withplentifulselectionoptions…简化成Withplentifulselections…更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表

5、达力反而增强许多；　　高分版　　Withthehelpoftheeverrapiddevelopmentofinternettechnology,onlineshoppingiscomingintofashioninmostofcities.　　Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetovariousreasons.Fromtheperspectiveofconsumer,itcansavesometimeforpeoplewhodon’thavemuchsparetime.Justclickthemouse,theycangetw

6、hatevertheywantwhilestayingathome.Fortheretailers,itcancutsomecostsforthosewhodon’thavemuchcirculatingfunds.Theydon’thavetorentahouseandspendmoneyonemployeescomparedwiththetraditionaltrademode.However,therearestillsomedefectsinonlineshopping.First,laceoffacetofacedealmakesonlineshoppingle

7、ssreliableandtrustworthy.Second,peoplewilllosethefunofbargain.　　Itisundeniablethatshoppingontheinternethasbecomeanirresistibletrendinmodernsociety.It’sofgreaturgencythatweneedtoregulatetherelativelawsaccordancewiththerapidgrowthofonlineshopping.Onlyinthiswaycanweenj