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1、《高考英语科考试说明》中第五档（21~25分）的给分范围和要求覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。全、准、顺、雅怎样给作文润色合理的想象和发挥选词特色句式的多样关联词的使用1.多实少虚:Aniceperson2.短语优先：Icannotbearit.Wewantpeace.generous,humorous,smart,gentle,warm-hear
2、ted,hospitable,considerate,promisingIcannotputupwithit.Wearelookingforwardtopeace.３弃旧取新:Therearemanytreesinthestreet.Thereisacleanriverinthecity1.较高级词汇Manytreeslinethestreet.Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity.复杂多样的句式复合句倒装句强调结构非谓语感叹句虚拟语气独立主格结构、反意问句、并列句、名言、警句等丰富的语法结构(Exe
3、rcises1)1.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.Hecameinandtherewasababyinhisarms.(用with结构),pleasegivemeane-mail.isthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.OnhisarrivingWhatsurpriseshimHecamein,withababyi
4、nhisarms.4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语）5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)6.TomandMarylikesingingsongs.(使用倒装）Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthat，hecan’tgetintouchwithTomNotknowinghistelephonenumberheknewwhathadhappe
5、ned.丰富的语法结构(Exercises2)Tomlikessingingsongs,Mary.sodoes7.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.（使用句型结构）9.Becausetheweatherisfine,manypeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.（使用独立主格结构）bymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthel
6、ab.,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.hespoke,excitedhefelt.丰富的语法结构(Exercises3)FollowedThemorethemoreTheweatherbeingfine关联词的使用（1）表时间的.（2）表顺序及过程的：first(ly),firstofall,second(ly),atfirst,then,next,atlast,finally,etc.（3）表转折的：but,yet,andyet,instead,however
7、,although,though,otherwise,orelse,inspiteof,etc.（4）表结果的：thus,therefore,so,asaresult,seeingthat,luckily,(un)fortunately,etc.（5）表强调的：firstofall,aboveall.indeed,surely,certainly,ofcourse,afterall,atleast,atmost,etc.6)表递进的：besides,what’smore,inaddition,even,oncemore,wh
8、atwasworse,tomakethingsworse,etc.（7）表解释或说明的：inotherwords,thatis,thatistosay,namely,forexample,actually,andsoon,suchas,personally,believeitornot,t
