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1、作文讲评ASSESSMENTS(评价标准)Structure框架结构Isthearticledividedintoparts?Content内容要点Areallthedetailsstated?Areallthedetailstothepoint(切题)?Language语言表达Doesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?表达错误Isthereanyadvancedvocabularyorsentencepatterns(高级词汇和句式)?structure:_______
2、___paragraphsP1:_________________P2:_________________P3:_________________3descriptionreasonsforthephenomenonmeasuresparagraphone:(1)Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,anoldmanisfallingdownontheroad.Manypeoplepassedbybutnoonestoppedtogiveahandtohimbecausetheyareafraidofbeingw
3、rongedastheoffenders._____________________felldown/islying______________________________passedby/passbystopped/stopswere/are(2)Formthepicturewecanseethatanoldmanfelldownonthegroundandmanypeopleweresurroundinghim.However,peopledidn’tdaretohelphim.because...forfearthat..
4、.theywouldbewrongedasoffenders.paragraphtwo:(1)Inthepastfewyears,toomanypeoplehavebeenwrongedasoffenders.Asaresult,peoplehavethesenseoffear.(2)Someexampleswheretheelderlywillwrongthehelpersasoffendersmakepeopledarenotgiveahand.=======================deepreasonspeopleca
5、n'tbelieveineachotherlackthesenseofsocialmoralityexample1:example2:Peoplecan'tbelieveineachother,becausetherearesomanycaseswherekindpeopleareaccusedofoffendersafterhelpingtheold.It'sthatpeoplearelackingintraditionalvirtuesthatleadstothephenomenonhappening.paragraphthre
6、emeasures(aboutlowtrust)governmentshouldmakelawstoprotectthehelpers(aboutlackofmorality)increasethesenseofmoralityLanguage：Properlinkingwords(恰当的连词)时间顺序first,second,then,finally,atlast,soon,immediately,suddenly……对称顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhand
7、……转折顺序but,yet,however,while,though,otherwise，inreality,instead,nevertheless,afterall…...因果顺序because,since,as,for,thanksto,owingto,dueto,asaresult,……条件顺序aslongas,onconditionthat,if,unless，onlyif……让步顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,wh-(what,when,where,how)+ever…….递进顺序an
8、d,what’smore,besides,inaddition,furthermore,moreover,tomakethematterworse,what’sworse……过渡性插入语I’mafraid,youknow,Asweal
