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1、书面表达评析1自我评价2高分技巧作为高二的学生，对未来的生活充满了美好的期待。请根据下面的提示以“Mydream”为题写一篇100词左右文章我的梦想？为什么会有这样的梦想？怎样才能实现自己的梦想？MyDreamIhaveadreamhaveagoodjob.Butwithoutadegree,Ifounditdifficulttofindasuitablejob,soIverythinkgotoauniversity.IgotouniversityifIcomeundergraduate.Myparentsaredelight.Nomatterhowgreatthedi
2、fficultyis,Iamdeterminedtoovercomeit,thisismyparents’wish,andmydreamtoo.Ihaveadreamtogotoagooduniversity,thisismyhope.14高考书面表达评分原则第二挡（较差）（10-15分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务*漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容*语法结构单调，词汇项目有限*有语法或词汇错误，影响了对内容的理解*较少使用语句间的连接词，内容缺少连贯性，14Everyonewantstobeasuccessfulpeopleinthefuture.Iwanttobeagrea
3、tman,too.Myfavoritejobispsychologist,andIwanttobeapersonwhoisoneofthem.Dreamisdifficulttoachieve,onlybystudyinghardcanIachievemydream.EverytimeIimaginethesituationthatIstandonasuccessfulman’sviewandtoldsomemissingpeopleandsay“Hardisveryusefulandyoushouldbelievesinyourself”Ithinkdreamwill
4、cometruesomedaydependingonmyattitude.Underthepressurecanraisemyselfandisveryimportantformystudy.Iwilltrymybest.Dreamcancometrue,andbelieveinyourself,ofcourse,workhard.18高考书面表达评分原则第三档（适当）（16–20分）*基本完成了试题规定的任务。*虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有内容应用的语法和词汇能满足任务的要求*有一些语法和词汇错误，但不影响理解*应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。18Eve
5、ryonehastheirowndream,sodoI.Dreamcangivemuchenergytometodoeverything.IhaveadreamthatIwillbeagooddoctor,neverwillIforgetthefaceexpressionofthepatients.Ihaveeverseenawomandyingofdiseases,sheissokindandbeautiful.“Whyshouldshedie?”Iaskedmyself.Ihavebeendeterminedtobeadoctorsincethen.KidasIam
6、,Iknowitisdifficulttoaccomplishit.NotonlyshouldIstudyhard,butIshouldlearnmoremedecineknowledge.NomatterhowgreatdifficultyIface,Iwillnevershakeit.25高考书面表达评分原则第五挡（好）（25-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务*覆盖所有主要内容*语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求*语法或词汇应用基本准确，有些许错误但主要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致，*应用简单的语句间的连接词，使全文紧凑，25Adreamistoamanwhatwing
7、saretoabird.Everyonehasalotofdreams.WhenIwasyoung,IdreamedofbecominganastronautlikeYangLiweiinfuture.WhenIwasyoung,IoftenwonderedwhetherIcouldflyintospace.Theskyissobeautifulthatmanypeoplearestruckbyitdeeply.Mostimmortally,YangLiweiwassentintospacebyChina’sShenzhouspacecr
