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1、英语作文扩句练习扩句的方法在学习扩句法之前,先对学生进行五个简单句句型,并列句和复合句的专项训练,打好基础。扩句是在基本句型的基础上,添加各种修饰成分,使句子得到扩展,即根据表达的需求增加定语,状语,同位语等成分,或者举例子补充细节内容,或者添加谚语俗语等。1.WearrivedinSanya.WearrivedinSanya,happilyandexcitedly.(添加副词)2.Iliketomakefriendswithmyclassmates.------Iliketomakefriendswithmyclassmates
2、,whohavethesameinterestasmine.(添加定语从句)3.Wewerehappyandreturnedhome.-------Wewerehappyandreturnedhomeafterwehadfinishedcollectingalltherubbish.(添加状语从句)4.Ilikereadingbooks.-------Ilikereadingbooks,suchasnovels,shortstories,magazinesandnewspapers.(通过举例补充细节)5.Weshouldstud
3、yhard.--------Asweallknow,“Practicemakesperfect”.Soweshouldstudyhard.(添加谚语)6.Ioftenjoininmanyactivities.--------Ioftenjoininmanyactivitiesinordertocommunicatewithotherstudentsandbroadenmymind.(添加目的状语)试题要求:假如你是一名中学生,请以Mycolorfulschoollife为题,写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计
4、入总数。要点提示:1:上课认真听讲2:课后完成作业3:经常参加体育锻炼4:去图书馆阅读I’mahighschoolstudentandIunderstandwhatI’mstudyingfor.Ihavebeenworkinghard.____________________________________________Maytherealwaysbecolorfullifearoundmyschool.学生的习作:I’mahighschoolstudentandIunderstandwhatI’mstudyingfor.Iha
5、vebeenworkinghard.Ilistentotheteachercarefully.Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass.Ioftentakeexercise.Ioftenreadintheschoollibrary.Maytherealwaysbecolorfullifearoundmyschool.点评:该学生能完整的写出各个要点,没有出现太大的语法错误,表达通顺,单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够,没有达到100个字左右,字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题。其次,句子的表达过于平淡无奇,没有句式多样化
6、和使用高级词汇,固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。而且,没有使用连接词,上下文的连接不够顺畅。改进方法:步骤一:列要点把要写的内容要点化,做到要点齐全。1:Listentotheteachercarefully2:finishmyhomework3:takepartinexercise4:oftenreadinthelibrary步骤二:造简单句充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充,使其变成一个完整的句子。每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整性,语法是否正确,说法是否符合英语表达习惯。1:Ilistentotheteachercare
7、fullyintheclass.2:Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass.3:Ioftentakepartinexercisewithmyclassmates.4:Idosomereadingintheschoollibrary.步骤三:扩展句子1:IlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclasssothatIcanunderstandwhattheteacherssay.(增加目的状语从句)2:Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass,whichisapieceofc
8、akeforme.(增加定语从句)3:Ioftentakepartinexercisewithmyclassmates,suchasplayingfootball,goingswimmingandplayingbadmintonetc.(举例说明)
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