大学英语作文-大学英语作文模板--老年人的孤独生活.doc

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1、大学英语作文大学英语作文模板:老年人的孤独生活六级作文：老年人孤独生活PartIWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsonthelonelylifeofagedpeople.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180

2、words.【范文参考】Givenisasimplebutthought-provokingcartoon:anagedgrandmasitsinfrontofmirror,lookingat“herself”inthemirrorandsayingtoherself,“Ifeelratherlonelywhenmysongoestoworkandmygrandsonstudiesinschool.”首句功能为：引出图画;之后为图画内容描述，主要是四要素：人/物、动作、文字和环境，写出四要素中的两三点即可。Obviously,thiscart

3、ooncanbenaturallyassociatedwiththesignificanceofchildren’saccompanyforagedparents:ifelderlypeopleintendtoenjoyhappiness,itisadvisablefortheirchildrentospendmoretimeinparents.Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrendforyoungpeopletobebusywiththeirworkandstudy.Meanwhile,anincre

4、asingnumberofyoungstersfinditdifficulttohavesparetimetoaccompanylonelyparents.However,itisadultchildren’saccompanythatenablesagedparentstobuildupadequatehope,loveandenthusiasmforlife.Asamatteroffact,youngpeopleinlargenumbershavenotcometorealizethelonelinessofagedpeople.二段首句

5、：图画联系主题;之后if句为图画简单评论;incontemporarysociety一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受;however之后为强调句式，论述意义;尾句是万能总结。Asayoungster,Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforustoaccompanyagedparents,nomatterhowbusyweare.Accordingly,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriends,classmatesan

6、dacquaintancestolove,respectandcareallelderlypeople.(196words)尾段首句：观点;二句建议;尾句展望未来。