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1、WRITINGTASK1　　Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.　　ThegraphbelowgivesinformationaboutcinemaattendanceinAustraliabetween1990andthepresent,withprojectionsto2010.　　Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.　　Writeatleast15

2、0words.ThegraphshowspercentagesofcinemaattendanceatleastonceayearinAustraliabetween1990to2010withprojectionsforthefuture.Thegraphisdescribedby4groupsofdifferentageswhichare14to24,25to34,35to49andover50yearolds.　　Theyoungestagegrouppeoplehavebeengoingtocinemamorethananyothera

3、gegroupsandthepercentagehasbeenkeepingveryhighatapproximately90%since1990.Itispredictedtokeepthehighandtoincreasemorefrom2006.　　Themiddleagegroupspeoplehaveenjoyedgoingcinemabetween60%to80%.Thepercentageofage25to34grouphasbeenhigherthantheoneofage35to49groupbutfrom2006theper

4、centageof25to34yearoldspeoplewilldecreasewhiletheoneof35to49yearoldspeoplewillincreaseandgethigherthantheotherone.　　Theoldestpeopleseemtogocinemalessthantheothergroupsbutthepercentageoftheattendancehasslightlygoingupby15%from40%to55%between1990to2004anditwillkeepincreasingto

5、60%by2010.　　Overall,itseemstheyoungeragepeople,themoregoingtocinema.　　(210words)　　【考官评语】　　Band6　　Thisresponseaddressestherequirementsofthetaskandselectsrelevantmaterialtodescribe.Keyfeaturesandanoverviewarepresented,althoughclearerhighlighting,moresupportandamorecomprehensiv

6、eoverviewwouldbeneededtoreachahigherband.Informationiswell-organisedandthereisaclearoverallprogressionintheresponse.Thereissomeeffectiveuseofcohesivedevices,butonlylimiteduseofreferenceandsubstitution.Therangeofvocabularyisnotwide,butitisadequateforthetask.Controlofwordforma

7、ndspellingisconsistentlygood,althoughtherearesomeclumsynounphrasesthatindicatelimitedflexibility.Thecandidateattemptstouseamixofsimpleandcomplexsentences,butcontrolisvariableandgrammaticalerrorsoromissionsarequiteintrusiveattimes.Figuresarepoorlyintegratedintosentencesandind

8、icateevidentlimitations.