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1、写作要领和技巧1． 审题与构思2． 展开段落3. 修改定稿l 基本要求硬件要求1）作文紧扣题目。2）字数要够。3）段落清晰，建议采用三段式结构。4）卷面整洁，字迹清楚。软件要求1)重点突出，简明扼要2）文理通顺，前后连贯3）合乎英语语法规范，写出正确的句子，诸如主谓一致，时态，语态，情态使用合理，关系代词或指示代词的遗志，从句的安排，以及标点符号的使用要恰当等。4）要注意句型的多样化，有短句也有一些长句，有简单句也有复合句。不能通篇使用同一个主语或同一种句型。例：Thepeopleenjoyingthecoolcouldbeheardtalkin
2、gattimes.Acrossthestarlessskythelightningwithoutthundercouldbeseenattimes,andthen,intheflashthetremblingwillowswerevisible.Aftertheflash,allwasinthepitchdark. Gradually,thepeopleenjoyingthecooldispersedanditcouldbeseenthatallroundbecamequiet.Thenadistantthundercouldbeheardand
3、frogsstoppedcroakingasiffrightenedbythethunder.Thewindroseagainandthewillowleavescouldbeseenresulting.修改后： Thevoicesofthepeopleenjoyingthecoolcameinsnatches.Fromtimetotimeasilentflashoflightningsplashedthestarlessskywithaharshblueglareandforonestartledmomentshowedtheweepingwi
4、llowsbythepond,droopingandtremblingoverthewater.Thensuddenly,darknessreignedagain. Then,onebyone,peoplewhohadenjoyedthecoolairdriftedawayandsilenceclosedinonallsides.Arumbleofdistantthunderseemedtofrighteneventhefrogsintosilence:abreezesprangupagain,rustlingtheleavesofthewill
5、ows.l 作文评分范例分析 Inoureverydaylife,weoftenmeetsomepeoplewhoaskusforhelp.Whatshallwedo? Ofcourse,helpingothersisavirtue,butinsomecases,wewillhavesay“no”.Forexample,ifwhatotherswantyoutodoisunreasonableorevenillegal,youshouldsay“no”withoutanyhesitation.Everyonehashisownprincipleo
6、fdoingthings,andwewon’tdoanythingoppositetotherightprinciple.Ifwedid,itwoulddonothingbutharmtobothofusandothers.Insomecases,iftherequestfromothersisreasonablebutbeyondyourability,whatyoushoulddoisjusttosay“no”.Neverpromiseotherswhatyoucan’tdo.Ifyoucan’tkeepyourpromise,youwill
7、beconsidereddishonestanditwilldoyounogoodwhendealingwithotherpeople. Inaword,ifwedon’twanttogetintounnecessarytrouble,justsay“no”withoutanyhesitationwhenitisquitenecessary.(18分) Mostofushopetocreateafriendlyatmospherewithothers,soitisimportanttohelptheotherpeoplewhentheyneedy
8、ourhelp.Butsometime,undersomeconditionsitismorewisetosay“no”.Forexam
