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1、借鉴和模仿是提高写作的基石。先借来再转为自用是巧学者之法。内容可适用于读写任务正文部分。--Miss.Q英语作文例文点评88篇（收集于网络）【要求】英语课上老师教给同学们一句英语格言“NoPains,NoGains”（不劳则不获），并让大家围绕如下三方面以这句格言为题写一篇短文。人们在困难面前容易气馁，并产生不劳而获的想法。“不劳则不获”这一格言能给予人鼓励。学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫，所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动。【范文】NoPains,NoGains　Peopleattemptingataskmaybediscouragedinfrontofdi

2、fficulties.Theystartwithagreatinterestandpassion.Whentheyfindthatthetaskwilltakemuchmoreeffortthantheythought,theirinterestdiminishesandtheirpassionwanes.Atthattime,theyarelikelytohavetheideaofreapingagoodharvestwithoutmuchlabor.Theoldsaying“Nopains,nogains”comesasawordofcheertot

3、hesediscouragedpersons.Notaskthatisreallyworthdoingcanbedoneeithereasilyorquickly.Nomasteryofanyknowledgeorskillcanbegainedwithoutpainstakingefforts.Westudentsshoulderthetaskoflearningknowledgethatcallsforexertion.Toimproveourgradesiswhateverystudentwants.Wemayenvythosewhohaveach

4、ievedexcellence,andwonderwhatmakesthemsucceed.Infact,theirsecretofsuccessisnosecret.Itdependslargelyontheirefforts.Goodgradesonlybelongtohardworkingstudents.Manythanksforthefavoryoudidforme!【评语】该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述，层次清楚，语言流畅易懂。“interestdiminishesandtheirpassionwanes”中词语搭配讲究，“reapin

5、gagoodharvestwithoutmuchlabor”用另一个习惯表达法点出了“NoPains,NoGains”的含义，同时又避免了重复。文章句式灵活，长短搭配得当，使文章朗朗上口，虽然是议论文，但却没有枯燥之感。【要求】根据下面的提示写一篇短文，内容须包括下面几个要点。没有坚强的意志就不可能取得成功。事业成功须非凡的干劲。有些人害怕困难，则一事无成。【范文】WherethereisaWill,ThereisaWay　Nomancanwinsuccesswithoutstrongwill.Wehearsomemenhavegotgoodresult

6、s,buthardlyrealizethatthegreatmenhadbeenmakingmoreeffortsbeforetheyachievedsuccess.Successrequiresanunusualamountofenergytoovercomedifficulties.Soitisimportantforustohavegreatresolution.Somementendtobeafraidofdifficulties.Iftheymeetwithsomedifficulties,theywillgivein.Sotheygetnot

7、hingeventually.Solet'smakeupourminds,sticktoitandsurelywinsuccessinourcareer.Focusonthemostimportantthingstodotohelpyourorganizationbesuccessful.Don'tfocusontheeasiestthings.【评语】对这种提纲式作文，一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容，但又无须拘泥于提纲，更不能逐字逐句地“翻译”。对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力，大胆地创作扩展。【要求】很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得

8、胜利。成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋学习的精神。请你以此为主要内容，准